The Fox Immortal of Uncle Jiu's World

After reading the introduction, why are all the disciples female?

It doesn't matter whether there is a single heroine, multiple heroines, or no heroine, as long as the writing is good, it doesn't matter. I am afraid that the writing will fail regardless of whether there is a heroine or not. So what do you think?

If you're writing about cultivation, you shouldn't write so much about Ren Tingting's "sexual" interest in the protagonist. I almost wanted to abandon the book. The protagonist is a fox who hasn't even transformed. Why write so much love? Humans and demons have different paths. If they really write about two people together, the entire righteous path, including Uncle Jiu, will take action against the protagonist.

I just read a novel. The male protagonist is a black law mage. Ren Tingting's Tianling Cap was smashed in one fell swoop, and she died miserably.

At present, 39 chapters are temporarily non-toxic. If the author maintains stable quality and the setting does not collapse, it will be considered a good idea. But when I read the introduction, there was a foreign plot, which I felt was particularly inconsistent. I hope the author can handle this part of the plot well.

Adapting to the changes of the times, I will first go to the mainland, then go to Hong Kong and Taiwan, and finally go abroad. I will write a lot about Japan, Korea, Thailand and the United States. Come on.

The Buddha in the South, the Immortal in the North, Hu Huang, but Shanhaiguan don't understand this? The immortals cannot pass through Shanhaiguan, and the Tao cannot spread to the three eastern provinces... The immortal family on the disciples who have passed Shanhaiguan will not follow them. First, the magic power is greatly reduced. Secondly, the souls of Shanhaiguan conflict with the immortal family and may force them to stay. So it's not good for you to write this

The writing is quite interesting, but there is too little. When will the protagonist become stronger and not have to be humble to others, although I also know that this is the only way to go.

On the fantasy side, I went to someone else's comic book, are you a traveling frog? Running around? Can't A Chinese Ghost Story work? Wouldn't Journey to the West work? The list of gods, Liaozhai, Oriental Xianxia, ​​monsters, monsters, monsters, so many monsters are not enough for you to fight monsters and upgrade?

Everything else is fine. It's just the interaction with Hua Rong that really detracts from it. It's okay not to be with Hua Rong. As soon as he is with Hua Rong, the protagonist feels that he has become brainless and has become a licking dog who cannot lick well.