Starting Out as a Ghost Cat

How to put it this way, I actually didn't like Heating Pirates, but I bit the bullet and read it because I didn't have a book to read. But the pirates turned around and retaliated, and the protagonist couldn't stop it. Well, it wasn't impossible. After that, I arranged a plot of betrayal and caesarean section. Ennn, I haven't read the original work, so I didn't have any reaction, but in terms of reading experience, it was quite disgusting.

When I read Chapter 53, I didn't want to read it anymore. I'd like to complain about some parts of the book that were uncomfortable to read. First of all, the part about the magic knife. The twist was too abrupt. They were fighting life and death for a month, and finally they fought together once. When the cat escaped, he promised to save the magic knife, and the magic knife was moved... Then the alchemy requires emeralds. He went to the Isle of Man and did so many things just for an emerald necklace. There are people around me to follow, go to China, where there is a lot of jade, and if you are afraid of harmony, go to Southeast Asia, where there is a lot of jade. The last part is the scene where the governor's wife dies. A pirate is beaten and all the troops are taken away. When the lady escapes, she is surrounded by 5 knights, 3 guards and a few maids, and there is a traitor among the maids... Also, I came to read this book to see the cat you wrote, but after fighting the pirates, you went to write Jack again, and wrote several chapters. I want to read Jack's story, why don't I go to the movie? That's all. The world is far away. It's easy to get together and part ways. We'll never see each other again.

The writing is delicate and very beautiful. However, there are still no other worlds to travel to. I hope the author can write better. The description of this supporting character is also very good. The only problem now is that it's out of the main plot, maybe, I haven't seen too much of it. Come on author

How can I put it this way? The protagonist gave me a heartless feeling 1. I didn't know the side effects of scratching someone for the first time. The protagonist scratched Jack and it was okay, but everyone knows that scratching people will make people become dementia. Because Captain Jack seemed fine and scratched again for the soul fragment, what if the person has a special physique and can withstand the second time and cannot withstand the dementia? Moreover, it can plunder the opponent's soul fragments, and there is no guarantee that there will be any damage to the soul. The protagonist has never thought about these feelings. If you scratch them, you will not be demented, so you can scratch them casually in the future. It feels like this kind of logic. 2. The protagonist always does things in hindsight and does not think ahead. The protagonist Blackbeard knew that he was trapped on the ghost ship and the local spirit could not get out. He felt that he was looking for a reason when Blackbeard did not come. He did nothing and waited for Blackbeard to come. In the end, Captain Jack took a cat skull and ran out. Then the protagonist wanted to do alchemy, so he practiced it directly on the boat. After practicing, he thought that luckily it didn't explode. Why did he go there earlier? Knowing the risks of alchemy, why can't we take some measures in advance? Also, the protagonist, a ghost cat, can find the other party's base camp by finding a pirate to follow him. He has to ask Bill to be a spy, and then he is addicted to alchemy joints. He just finished alchemy the day before. If you indulge for one more day, will Bill be tricked by you? The Governor doesn't know when your contact will be able to call you. To sum up, I feel that the protagonist is not thinking. Every thought comes up. Can you make the protagonist more intelligent? Don't always think you are lucky when things are over. If you are not lucky, the protagonist will either sink with the ghost ship or be blown up by his own alchemy array.

The Caribbean was just getting by, but when it came to Harry Potter, it was disgusting. They were still very childish. Since they were reborn as ghost cats, don't make the protagonists mentally weak, just like 15-6-year-old children. Now the protagonists in the novels have personality problems. They are either naive or crazy. Their brains are more or less different from those of normal people. I don't know which trend has gone astray. This was not the case before.

Let me report the work status to my bosses: On the sixth day after publishing the book, two chapters will be updated steadily every day. The current collection is 123, the monthly ticket is 34, and I am following up... Well, I don't know~ It's so difficult for newcomers to write new books. Please post a post. Don't leave so much empty space unused, it's such a waste!

I can accept the handsome cat baron (the one in Cat's Repayment), but I can't accept the transformation into a human being.

I just started watching it, and I feel like a lot of the plot development is a bit deliberate.

The protagonist also has the Virgin's Heart 😅. It doesn't need to be evil, as long as you attack criminals and gangsters, you can easily obtain soul fragments. The protagonist can also go to the east to steal emeralds. It is easy to obtain emeralds. The protagonist is not a living creature. Starting from the North Pole is very fast and does not take long at all. It's always trading, the protagonist is a different kind of person, how heartless is it to trade with humans.

I would like to give some advice to the author. If you are not an author with a basic fan base of v5 or above, or your writing style is particularly strong, please do not write slow-burning articles. If you read too many books, you will not want to read them when you see these two words. I don't know if others are like this too.