True Yang

1. The role of the golden finger is not played well. The golden finger is to speed up the protagonist's understanding of various skills. At present, there is only one thunder method. After practicing, there is no exciting fight to highlight the extraordinary thunder method 2. It is recommended to give the protagonist more difficult skills or spells to increase the sense of satisfaction. I have it if no one else has it 3. Be less arrogant. At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist cannot be exposed and has been suppressing and not upgrading. After becoming a pill, the protagonist is caught in the conflict between the family and the leader, and has no time to practice. The plot of the family sacrificing the protagonist feels very strange. Can the protagonist marry a girl from a small family to convince other families that the Li family is on their side? I took it for granted 4. The protagonist went out to avoid the storm. I thought it was because the sea is wide and the fish can jump, and the sky is high enough for birds to fly. Instead, I started writing about two mortal women fighting for the throne. After forming the elixir, can they do something serious?

I still feel that it is a bit difficult to read The writing style is not popular and elegant enough, and it is a bit tiring to read After reading a long paragraph, I am a bit confused I don't know if it is my personal problem🙂

Given the name Zhenyang, the high realm must have the style of fighting on the road, and don't end up fighting with boxing and bastard punches later.

Is the author the reincarnation of Lao Deng? It's rare to see a well-written classical fairy tale in the starting point.

It's so familiar. Can you stop being a bad eunuch in this book?

Could it be the True Yang Power from Dao Zhengfeng?

Too many flies and dogs are not a good thing

Nascent Soul travels everywhere, and the golden elixir is not as good as a dog. You, a golden elixir, are still wandering around in a high-profile manner. What do you think?

Are you asking for a eunuch before it's even released?

A few days ago, I was bragging about being a eunuch. It's been 2 days now. Haha, come into the factory.

Dear author, I beg you, it is impossible that your writing style is not the trumpet of some big shot. I don't know if you are Danzi or another big shot, but please write a few million words for this book. Please stop being an eunuch. I have searched through the starting point of the classical fairy tales with such authentic fairy tales on the market and I can't find a few, and most of them are eunuchs. As long as you continue writing, your grades will definitely not be bad, because there are no competing products at all.

Brother, your writing is too narrative, it makes your head hurt when you read it. My writing is already cumbersome and difficult to pronounce, and your writing is even worse.

This kind of time-traveling, reincarnation, and reconstruction is the least interesting thing. A novel in the trash.

What kind of plane? I didn't say much about the last book, The Eunuch. It's okay to read this book, so why not write it?

Your new book has been cut after less than 100 chapters, and I'm scared to start a new one 😥

Does anyone know what the author's previous book was called?

Xianyang also had the same cover at the beginning, which was somewhat influenced by Karma 🔨. Please change the cover quickly.

I really beg you, don't be reborn as dirt.

Speechless, it's the rhythm of the great eunuch again