Dao Yuzhi Tian: from the System to the Invincible Road to Another World

I don't even know what I wrote at the end of the novel I wrote. It's a novel written without a brain. Don't use your brain when watching it. I feel that the novel I wrote is a bit rubbish. Can you give me your opinion? I plan to write a novel again. I have prepared a draft and have finished writing it. I will send out two copies every day. I haven't written much.