Planting Dao Nanshan: I Plant Supernatural Powers in My Internal Organs

I don't know whether the book is good or not, but the people are indeed good-looking.

It can be clearly felt that the author does not have a sufficient understanding of male porn novels. Although the author is trying very hard to adapt, she obviously cannot understand the so-called coolness of male porn. The best condition of the entire book is before it is put on the shelf. It is estimated that an editor personally followed her and gave her suggestions for improvement over and over again. To be more specific, it is considered a good work before the Awakening Ceremony. The treatment at the beginning reminded me of Keanu Reeves' smoking cessation movie. The subsequent development is left to the author's own ingenuity. From the beginning of the treatment case, the general framework of the world and sudden unexpected events are introduced, and then all the special abilities of the protagonist are managed to escape. The storyline and rhythm are gradually exciting and exciting, successfully arousing the interest of readers. After escaping, I returned to the orphanage to explain some daily life. Although there were conflicts, they were relatively not intense, and some major supporting characters were also introduced. What followed was a big event, and around this big event, the setting of the monster side was further developed. At least up to this point in the book, before the awakening ceremony, Wuhen is really good. But when the awakening ceremony begins, it becomes a little strange. After entering the campus, the whole story becomes more and more strange. The combat power system collapsed, the level system was useless, the battle mode was confusing due to monsters, the protagonist's abilities were exaggerated, the protagonist was given a pillow when he fell asleep, the inexplicable logic of character behavior, and some tributes to the plots of male videos - I really don't want to say it's a parody, so let's pay tribute. Maybe this is the characteristic content of male videos from a female perspective. How many chapters have I read? I'll try to see if I can see the ending, but I want to say one more thing. Why do you want to kill your pet companion for no reason? What's the purpose?

There are too many introductions, and the introduction that relies on a third-party tone to advance the plot will look like a Douyin Shuangwen animation.

The recommendation has been voted in, please update quickly. Also, I have never been to Sichuan. What is the matter with Tyrannosaurus 🐉

Can we do business? Is live streaming a business?

I have to say that the author's TikTok traffic is very successful. 👍

What was the author thinking? The first is that there is no benefit at all and a lot of trouble. When writing a novel, you should at least write it in a reasonable way. The protagonist should be so wise and wise, but in the end, there is no specific benefit.

Modern Gao Wu's Western flavor is too strong, why not go straight to this Western fantasy?

I wrote dozens of chapters for a big exam but didn't finish it. Judging from the description, this thing should be the beginning of spiritual practice. You wrote dozens of chapters right in front of the door? Is it possible that the test will not be conducted until it is released? If your book isn't long, I can't support it on the shelves.

I came from Douyin. This girl is good-looking. The book is hard to read in one sentence.

The author remembers to put down a selfie after each picture, this is the main text

I came here from Douyin, I want to see a sample of what you wrote, try it out.

Bad review! How can a man live between heaven and earth and remain depressed for a long time? The author, Liu Shishi, has a charming appearance. Instead of trying to be a celebrity among rich people on TV, she wants to be a celebrity among book friends based on her talent! Bad review! I want to see the c side 😡😡😡

To be honest, I'll put it bluntly, I watched it for a long time, it felt like I watched it for a long time, there was no highlight, but then again, no one thinks that the author looks like Liu Haocun, and the author's two front teeth are also very sexy 😍

Empress! What do you say on Douyin and Jiligulu every day?

Actually coveting the beauty of the anchor 😌

The book is not good-looking, but the author is good-looking🤣

There's no point relying on the content of the book. You can only rely on the author's appearance. Live broadcast more.

The writing is so damn delayed. I really don't understand what you wrote. I couldn't stand it after reading 20 chapters. The progress is too slow. The beginning was good, but then it got inexplicable, especially the kind of confrontation with water, which is meaningless. Those orphans insist on confronting each other. The same is true for the god. I looked at the table of contents and saw that chapter 80. Then I read more than 90 chapters. It's so slow and has no connotation. 🙂It's boring and clumsy, and elementary school students are fighting

I haven't watched Douyin yet, so I voted for recommendation, so I'll write a negative review.

The anchor posts a few selfies for each chapter, which guarantees that the recommended monthly tickets for reading will be fierce! 😏😏😏

The book is ordinary, but the author is extraordinary. I am a beauty fan.

Isn't this a book written by Yan Liang and Wen Chou?

How much can the author of this novel earn? If not, let the author take a back seat.

The author is very good-looking, but his writing needs to be improved.

The first half is okay, the routines are traditional, the plot is smooth, and there are not many poisonous points. It was originally a step-by-step dungeon to spread faith and improve strength, and finally solve the evil organization and the source of the strangeness. After that, you can conquer the heavens based on the original world, etc. The author's writing is not bad, and there is a chance to become a source of food. It is probably because the results were not good and the author was in a hurry to finish. After Stargirl and Disaster came out, the pace accelerated and there were too many poisonous points: 1. The villain Luo Ya has never died and has been blocking the protagonist and the readers. If you rely on her to push the plot, don't write it as a villain. The last time I saw this was in Zhe Tian, it was very poisonous 2. The protagonist's belief depends on the Tao tree, and the Tao fruit formed by the Tao tree is the secret hand of others. It is too fragmented and chaotic. In the end It was not explained clearly at the end. In fact, there is no need to explain the origin of the golden finger. Turning the golden finger into a talisman is also very poisonous 3. The inheritance of the disaster cause kills people, and then goes against the alliance. It is very baffling. I could have relied on the official development, but had to expose the disaster cause and go to the opposite side, and then make the alliance stupid, bad, and a bit anti-social 4. The protagonist's abilities are all conceptual level, and no matter how strong the opponent is, they only have those few tricks. At the end of the fight, just stop waiting and your combat power will collapse There are still a few questions: 1. It was written earlier that there was another person who awakened a doctor-like profession like the protagonist, but there was no sound in the end 2. The gods in the original world had no sense of existence. They were beaten away by the protagonist as soon as they appeared, which is not as big a trouble as the Dragon Pavilion caused to the protagonist 3. Where did Star Girl go? The protagonist ran away after she came out. Since she can run to another World, why does the protagonist still have to grab the key? 4. Forget about grabbing the key, it would have been better to absorb Luo Ya's power and run away earlier. I still had to kill Ye Xi, and the key didn't escape in the end. It was so exhausting 5. The endings of Xingyun Yun and Ji Lian were written too hastily That's all. I don't have high requirements for reading books.

Congratulations! It's great to last until the end!

I caught it on Douyin, let me see what happened.

Is there a chance that people who cause trouble for themselves will be kept for the New Year without being killed? I have to say that the diversion is done well.

It's actually over 🙂