In Emei, I Obtained a Golden Trait from the Start

When I watched Yitian back then, I felt that Ji Xiaofu was not in her right mind, and Jue Mie didn't realize where she was wrong. The most annoying thing was the QJ criminal Yang Xiao. When I saw him, I skipped the plot (it also has something to do with the person who played him). In the later period, Zhou Heihua's discomfort was also caused by Zhang Wuji. Why did Zhou let Zhang treat him like that and not Heihua.

I thought that your mental method has four levels in total, and the basic level is small and complete, but you told me that it is the first level of the mental method, the basic level, small and complete, 6666. I can't stand it.

Do you know why Wu Zong can't write well? There is no good because of the background and the influence on the original work For example, the Swordsman Huashan Sect in the article and the Huashan Sect among the six sects. If the two sects are together, will they really not fight? The names are all the same There is also the world's number one Iron Dan God Monkey. I am not the one to tell you how to attract stars. In the case of Iron Dan God Marquis, are you sure he won't be interested in Yitian Sword? The biggest problem with Zong Wu is that he has not thought about the changes in the plot Jianghu is a place where life and death are fought. There is a sect that has declined. It has profound martial arts, but there is no change. It is the same as in the original work. Only those in the original work will have thoughts about it.

In Zhao Min's original love story, the whole family betrayed Zhang Wuji. Isn't Zhou Zhiruo strong enough to become a villain? You were the first one I saw in the harem story about killing Zhao Min.

It's so boring behind the scenes, no matter where the gossip comes from, martial arts are about doing justice!

There are some minor poisonous points in the early stage, but it's harmless In the middle stage, the writing is online, the logic is normal, and the character description is not bad The problem later is that the author is now starting to get into trouble, that is, he overemphasizes the contradiction between good and evil, which often leads to him becoming the kind of annoying absolutely righteous person Only look at birth, not behavior You inherently evil Uchiha brat 21st century bloodline novels are also painful to some extent.

The plot is getting more and more boring. It's better to stop recruiting girls. There are already six or seven. Write more plots.

I don't understand that the protagonist goes through so much just to hire a bodyguard. The author writes about Wen Ruian's background and the beautiful women are prettier than those these days. Also, don't write about poison. If poison was so effective, Hu Qingniu's wife would already be among the best in the world. And has the author forgotten how the first book became a hit? The poisoning scene that you think is very pretentious seems very embarrassing to me. I came to watch the martial arts fight, not to see the poisoning scene.

You must not have read "The Legend of Yitian Sword" carefully. The article clearly stated that Miyue knew the secret of Yitian Sword and informed Zhou Zhiruo. Later, Zhang Wuji retrieved the Dragon-Slaying Sword from Binghuo Island, but Zhou Zhiruo cut each other with the swords, broke the swords, and stole the "Nine Yin Manual". Author, please read the original work carefully.

Anything that the protagonist gets can make him a master if given to others, but if the protagonist gets them all, everything is loose. The hang-up is huge, and the combat power is suppressed. The protagonist's aura is correct, and the villains are all facial expressions to reduce intelligence.