The Immortal Maiden in My Home Is Truly Fierce

After reading new novels, I summarized three problems: 1. Lack of new ideas, the subject matter is not bold enough, the opening chapter is uneventful, and the subject matter is old; 2. The protagonist is simple and has a single personality. The protagonists of the three books have strong similarities. He travels, cheats, attracts women and doctors, and it is conceivable that he is a prince-like protagonist; 3. There is a lack of conflict, a serious sense of nanny, and no restraint. What is a good book? Thirty years to Hedong, thirty years to Hexi! I have only read three chapters. To be honest, I am not arresting anyone. I have read what you wrote, and I have read it in more than one book, but I feel that your writing is very unfamiliar and abrupt. You can't even draw a map. It is too hasty. Martial arts fan fiction is very good, enough to feed one person, just like the Red Mansions chasing girl genre, write good characters, write good girls, still put new wine in old bottles, rush into a field that you are not familiar with, unable to write, and launch rockets again and again. In the end, the accumulated popularity is quickly lost, and you can only change to a new vest. In the new year, I hope you will forge ahead, write brilliantly, and achieve greater success on the stage where countless great gods have demonstrated their enlightenment.

Write about rebirth, soul penetration may be a poisonous point!

Good guy, another book to die for. 24 Chapters completed

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You clicked wrongly. The book is finished!

In fact, the doctor's feeling is quite good-looking, but it's a pity.

Damn it, it's so beautiful 😰 A divine book 🥵

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