Name: Douban: People Teach Xiao Yan, and He Can Speed Through the World
Author: Yes, Not Scum

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[Horizontal push] [Report on the spot if you have a grudge] [Refreshing article] [Speed pass] Time traveled to Xiao Yan, the protagonist of Dou Po, and the old man in the ring became Taishang Laojun, which made a big difference. Taishang preached, practiced the great immortal arts, condensed the Six Ding Divine Fire, and understood the golden elixir avenue... Facing the Yunlan Sect and others who came to visit, Xiao Yan attacked forcefully. "Thirty years in the east of Hedong, thirty years in the west of Hexi, Xiao Yan, the girl at the end of the world is poor!" The lines that should have belonged to him came out of the girl's mouth, and the elder of the Yunlan Sect took action to suppress the Xiao family in order to maintain the dignity of the sect. "Thirty years? That's too long!" "I just need...3.2.1!" Xiao Yan's aura surged wildly, and his realm skyrocketed. … This is the story of Xiao Yan's rapid passage through the Dou Qi Continent, across the vast world, and his quest to conquer the heavens.

Reader comments

To be honest, I regret voting for the monthly vote so early. How did such a good subject come to be written like this? A bunch of poison. The writing style of the first author is completely based on the template of Urban Dragon King, and it looks good in the Dragon King article. The protagonist Xiao Yan in the second start has a very poisonous point. Halfway through the soul penetration, Xiao Xun'er and Xiao Zhan should be the first to discover that the people around them who have lived together for 15 years have changed their personalities drastically. Do you have any doubts about the change in habits? Besides, Xiao Xun'er likes Xiao Yan, not the protagonist. How does the protagonist feel at ease? Xiao Zhan also loves Xiao Yan, so what if the protagonist is an orphan? Can being an orphan take over other people's bodies and enjoy the love of other people's parents? How disgusting. Why didn't the third author write about the original Xiao Yan? Why did you add a protagonist? Was it because you were afraid that you wouldn't be able to grasp Xiao Yan's character and that you would be criticized? It's like adding a protagonist and you won't be criticized.
7 likes1y ago
Author, please re-write it. You don't have much written now, just write the original anti-inflammatory and get the system. Don't say that Taishang Laojun is a bit too tall and can't write the system directly. Don't be too fancy about Laojun's various elixirs. One is the immortal system. One is the fantasy system, which many readers simply cannot connect to and cannot enter.
2 likes1y ago
Damn it, someone actually wrote this
2 likes1y ago
The protagonist gives me the feeling of an urban dragon king with a crooked mouth
1 like1y ago
To be honest, when it comes to changing the character of the protagonist, he must first cultivate his mind before cultivating immortality. This character is afraid of being unable to survive the three disasters.
1 like1y ago
Taishang Laojun, what the hell, shouldn't your name be Li Dan? Laojun, how could you call yourself Laojun? You don't even know the name, or don't you even know the name? Aren't you going to look up the information? Even if you can't find it, you still know the word Li Dan, right?
1y ago
Or you can just ask him to say "Lao Dan"
1y ago
It's well written, why do you need to rewrite it?
1y ago