Myriad Realms: Starting with a Bear Encounter While Hunting in the Mountains in 1980

Either lean towards fantasy, or towards xuanhuan (a genre of Chinese fantasy), or even everyday life or science fiction if all else fails. But yours is a hodgepodge of fantasy, war, and historical drama, more chaotic than the trinkets I brought home from a banquet. You're tomb raiding, stealing people, and then suddenly you're fighting in modern warfare, amidst a hail of bullets, and by sheer luck you survive, and then you're suddenly in ancient times. I'm having an epileptic seizure.

It would be better to write about the heavens directly. Once the real world is involved, it's hard to balance both. In reality, you can be a nobody, make some money, buy a big villa as a place to relax, keep a low profile, secretly foreshadow the heavens, and one day just fly a spaceship to settle down on Mars.

It looks fine for now. But then it gets a little uncomfortable to look at.

Well, to put it simply, you have too little of your own material. What I get to watch is just a segment of tomb raiding and a bit of "The Eight Hundred," while you've completely cut out your own story!

While I was writing, the system changed, and then there was a group teleportation... I don't understand what the benefit of this is? 😥

The dungeon became unwatchable once you reached the group stage.

Why did the author deliberately suppress the power of the guns? Is the protagonist going to kill himself by shooting a bear? What do you take a gun for? The largest bears in the world are taken down by two shots. Does the author really think bear skin is invulnerable to bullets? Is that skin that thick? Bullets can penetrate steel plates, let alone bears.

The first 18 chapters are of high quality. After chapter 18, it's a pile of garbage.

A bunch of random people, are they trying to make a fool of themselves?

There's no theme, no outline, it's all haphazard and disjointed, the language is incoherent, and it often feels like a paragraph is missing. It's like something out of a madman, even worse than an AI-generated version.