Zhutian: Dimensional Demon God Starting from American Comics

Wang Wan? This name is too random. The quality of the name can ruin a book.

I forgot where I saw it, I think it's quite appropriate.

I feel that All Heavens and Ten Thousand Angles is better, but Dimensional Demon God is a bit crappy.

It's a pity, the subject matter is quite good, but the author turned out to be a eunuch

I hope there will be a classic Marvel Thor

The author's writing is quite good. I think the plot and other aspects described are quite good. Do you really want to stop writing?

It's been three days, not even a bubble has come out.

Although there are some flaws, overall it looks good, but there are too few updates. 😍

I only have this request. If you agree, I will give you a monthly pass.

It's a bit outrageous, Jessica Jones was suppressed by Mouri Kogoro 😒

There is no big deal at all. There is a saying that it is called Jinyi Night Walk. It is a system of doing things. If it is too rough, it will not be authentic.

The writing is okay, everyone can read it😁

Marvel's behind-the-scenes leaks are pretty good Since we have Charles, I hope we don't stop at making up a few short-term organizations, and the entire Britannia Empire comes out, with greater strength ()

The setting of the protagonist's holster is so fucked up. It is completely possible to set the character to have his or her own consciousness. The protagonist can control their actions by manipulating the character's subconscious. In this way, the subsequent plot will not be embarrassing. And the author has set that every character is just the protagonist's holster. Then in the subsequent plot, if a group of characters talk to themselves without any outsiders, it will make me dig my toes into the floor in embarrassment.

After reading the first ten chapters, I gave up. The author's plot design was good, which was quite to my liking, but there was a problem with the character description. The protagonist's personality as the Dimension Demon God was too low-level, and it felt like a gangster pretending to be a godfather. Many words should not be spoken by the protagonist. They can be said in psychological descriptions or through other characters. Otherwise, it will become a forced pretense, making readers from a God's perspective look down on the protagonist and have no sense of involvement. For example, the "hum" in the screenshot I took is very redundant, and the boss's style immediately drops. I hope the author will continue to work hard

Ultimate Cosmic Quake

Chapter 2 explains that the protagonist's plug-in is a random card drawing system. I haven't read the rest yet, so I'll continue.

It is recommended not to introduce too many outlandish characters. Many behind-the-scenes articles I read show that the more characters appear, the more confusing the plot becomes.

Battle Ax Iron Bear As a boy, Thor was not yet qualified to use the Meow Hammer. Whenever Young Thor defeated his opponent or won a battle, he would try to lift the Meowth Hammer when he returned to Asgard. However, for a long time, no matter how hard Young Thor tried, the Meowth Hammer would not move at all. At this time, the tomahawk iron bear is a weapon used by young people to kill enemies in a bloody manner. But the Iron Bear weapon is just a spare tire that Thor doesn't cherish very much. In terms of ability, the Iron Bear is far less powerful than the Meow Hammer. It cannot summon thunder and lightning, and it will not automatically fly back to its owner's hand. Many people have used Thor's Iron Bear in battle. Thor once lost his godhood, and the Meowth Hammer was as heavy as a mountain to him. During this period, he had to use the Iron Bear to fight. Thor's combat power was greatly reduced after losing the Meow Hammer. During the battle with the dark elf Malekith, the iron bear was snatched away by Malekith and the Thor's left hand was cut off. Captain America also used Thor's Iron Bear to fight. In the future, Thor, who became the father of the gods, gave the battle ax Iron Bear to his little granddaughter Ellie Sif.

It's pretty good, you can read it, but sometimes the writing is awkward.

I've been wanting to read a novel like this recently, please read it.