From Marrying in My Twilight Years to Immortality

Su Waner

Can you please stop having a clone? It's really a show.

Shuhuang looks at it, it's okay, it's quite meticulous and systematic, but in order to highlight the cultivation of talismans, other people in the Yangqi Realm's fights are like playing house, just throwing talismans, and it feels like the comments have been deleted, why are they all good reviews?

How to say? The writing is good, but I skipped reading it. Let me talk about a few points. A bad old man with no cultivation got a truly stunning girl. To be honest, there is a sense of crisis. And the progress of his plot is obviously not like the way it was described in the past few months. Goldfinger is of the type that has been accumulated for a long time, so it will reflect that the progress of his practice is very slow. Maybe it is still in the early stage of polishing the first realm, or in the middle stage. Anyway, I jumped to the early stage when it was about to be put on the shelves, and the key point came again… The name of his first realm is called body nourishing At first glance, it is not compelling, and then this is still a big realm. According to the algorithm of one level and two levels, it should be the early stage of body nourishment when it is about to be put on the shelves... Then the protagonist joined the Holy Sect, or he was originally in the area of demon cultivators. Holy shit, the sense of crisis was even more overwhelming. I feel that it would be better to make some changes to the names or stages of the early stages of cultivation, including the rune stones studied by the protagonist. Changing the names and ranks gives people the feeling that the protagonist has been making progress and gained powerful power. Although it is temporarily unable to keep up with those geniuses who have practiced for decades, they are still making progress step by step. After all, to be honest, a large family in a city has guards who are over 20 years old and have not yet entered the ranks, which shows that the progress of the protagonist is actually not slow. However, according to the author's description, chapters are used as a progress I kept reading... But it felt too slow, too slow.

It's boring to change your appearance every time. Why do you need to have a face like this?

Feng Luoyi

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Why did the protagonist become a teenager? I came to read this novel because the protagonist's old age and cultivation attracted me. If I wanted to read a story about a teenage protagonist, most novels out there are about teenage protagonists. Should I come here to read it?

1. The setting is very good, and the overall plot is also very good. The male protagonist is also well portrayed. There are just a few problems, for example, earth culture is often used as a metaphor (this is a fairy tale). But there are some places that are a little bit good, for example, some of the language has a strong flavor of cultivating immortality. 2. There is no problem with the plot, it's just that it becomes boring after watching too many exercises. Compared with this, after more than 200 chapters, I mostly only focused on the main plot points and the plots of the heroines. I basically didn't pay close attention to things like how many skills, how many marks, how powerful, how many limits, etc. The characters of the heroines are well written, but it's a pity that they are not elaborated in detail. 3.1 If you can suggest that you write less details about the protagonist's growth, because the psychological description and evaluation after growth are quite repetitive, for example, most people can't do it by being better than anyone else, you are great and happy, you are a genius, etc. I know these points are what I want to write in the direction of a cool article. However, some of the author's descriptions do not fit the male protagonist's character and these comments after growing up are the same and boring. It's better to simplify it or have the male protagonist's own characteristics. 3.2 For example, after the male protagonist becomes stronger, he feels a little proud that he has surpassed the people he had to treat with caution before, and then immediately feels that he cannot be complacent and wants to be stubborn. I have a feeling that the author failed to grasp the style of writing and the character of the male protagonist. 4. In the later stage, there was some deviation from the introduction. For example, in the future plot, it is obvious that the hero will enjoy fighting with a vest. 5. There are some settings. For example, I remember that there was a setting in more than 100 chapters where people in the same realm were called senior brothers, senior sisters, junior brothers and junior sisters based on their age. After Chapter 300, it was said who is stronger and who is senior brother and senior sister. For example, in the setting, the male protagonist had a psychological description that he did not dare to approach the holy mountain for fear of being seen as a heel, but later he had no worries at all. For example, after the male protagonist had a causal relationship with Wangsheng, he found that he was the only one who could remember Wangsheng. He thought about it for a long time and couldn't figure out why. However, normal thinking is obviously because of his special features, such as time travel and golden fingers of ancient scrolls. (Normal people wouldn't think that this kind of opportunity has no cause and effect but is given to the time-travelers by Qidian Novel Network? I am speechless when I think of this custom. Many time-travel writers say that this golden finger is a natural after time-travel. This is not reasonable at all.)

Grain and grass level, Complaint In order to highlight the rune cultivation, it is written as an arms race. There is no difference between ordinary disciples and geniuses, and it is also a mindless throwing of rune stones. I hope the next level won't also involve throwing rune stones, otherwise the genius will practice so many advanced techniques just to throw them faster? It is recommended that you just learn one minor subject in each realm. It is better for you to go through the basics of Talisman, Formation, Weapon, and Plant in the Body Cultivation realm. When we reach the Blood Sea Realm, do we need to plow the second-level talismans, formations, weapons, and plants again?