Seeking Immortality? I Am an Immortal!

The writing and plot are okay, but the logic is very poor. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a bad book, a fairy tale like a book about monsters, but it turned out not to be the case. There is a big gap.

Looking at the first few pictures, I didn't feel that they were about immortals.

Can you tell me where "Xian" is? Which time traveler behaved as if his body had been taken away by the original owner, he was also drunk. A brainless piece of writing with no logic at all.

It is different from the introduction (personal understanding). The protagonist did not achieve enlightenment for himself, but found an immortal at the beginning...

Very good. The author is someone who has practiced immortality at first glance. He is realistic and very real. It matches my experience of cultivating immortality. It's not bad. 👍👍👍

The title is not good, it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is self-righteous, it would be better to just call it Xunxian

Jin Dian Yong Zhuan (The textual research is lost, a good man will make up for it)

My writing style is not good, I can't express that kind of artistic conception

Can you change the status of adults? Everyone is an adult. Why are you so low in status? Can you write it?

The writing has a unique flavor, it really has a fairy-like flavor. The writing is very smooth and the story is told eloquently. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm and the characters well. The overall slow rhythm may cause readers to lose interest in the book. I hope the author will think more about it. It is worth reading and highly recommended!