Exorcise Demons!

If you can't write multiple heroines well, it's best not to write them. Starting from a bunch of Xiaochunan authors, their writing is the same as the defense.

Have you ever been a warrior? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I clicked on the author's name, but later I saw that the author was only level 3 and had only written two books, so I realized I had been deceived. A well-chosen name is enough to fool people into looking like a fool, so let's talk about the art of fooling around.

Just use this pen name, it won't be bad. If it's bad, feel free to complain!

I thought it was a new book by Bear Wolf Dog, but after reading a few chapters I didn't feel like it. Some parts that should be explained in detail are skipped. The parts that should be skipped are too detailed, and there are a lot of things. They are doing business, practicing martial arts, fighting wits, and teasing Xiao Chunan. For my taste, the female characters are not particularly good, they are greasy and the appearance rate is too high. Generally speaking, this kind of flirtatious character should be difficult to see, and it is the kind that can't be seen or touched. This female demon appears so frequently, always beside the protagonist, and never explains why, which is a bit greasy. The subject matter is okay, a warrior in the steam age encounters the revival of spiritual energy, but it's not feasible for me to pay money to watch it. It's free.

Everyone's cultivation is accelerating, even getting faster, and bottlenecks are getting easier and easier to break through. So what's the use of the protagonist's so-called golden finger, which can only be used to speed up cultivation, but can't be used to break through bottlenecks? The effect is getting weaker and weaker, right?

What era are we in, and it's so cliche to write about brothers being enemies?

When I saw the author's name, I thought 🐻🐺🐶 was double opened, but when I looked carefully it was 🐺🐻🐶

At present, all the people killed are small fish and shrimps, but the protagonist let go of a big fish. . . What kind of fratricidal tricks are there? . . Do you think you are writing a spy drama? Putting the failure of the cross-sea battle on a traitor? Who do you mean by traitor? Confrontation across the sea was changed to division and rule across the river. . . . Let's see if we can kill a few big ones before putting them on the shelves?

At first glance, I thought it was Bear Wolf Dog opening a new book 🙂