Devil!

There is a female protagonist, I chase her 😍😍😍

If you can't write multiple heroines well, it's best not to write them. Starting from a bunch of Xiaochunan authors, their writing is the same as the defense.

Have you ever been a warrior? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I clicked on the author's name, but later I saw that the author was only level 3 and had only written two books, so I realized I had been deceived. A well-chosen name is enough to fool people into looking like a fool, so let's talk about the art of fooling around.

Just use this pen name, it won't be bad. If it's bad, feel free to complain!

I thought it was a new book by Bear Wolf Dog, but after reading a few chapters I didn't feel like it. Some parts that should be explained in detail are skipped. The parts that should be skipped are too detailed, and there are a lot of things. They are doing business, practicing martial arts, fighting wits, and teasing Xiao Chunan. For my taste, the female characters are not particularly good, they are greasy and the appearance rate is too high. Generally speaking, this kind of flirtatious character should be difficult to see, and it is the kind that can't be seen or touched. This female demon appears so frequently, always beside the protagonist, and never explains why, which is a bit greasy. The subject matter is okay, a warrior in the steam age encounters the revival of spiritual energy, but it's not feasible for me to pay money to watch it. It's free.

What era are we in, and it's so cliche to write about brothers being enemies?

Everyone's cultivation is accelerating, even getting faster, and bottlenecks are getting easier and easier to break through. So what's the use of the protagonist's so-called golden finger, which can only be used to speed up cultivation, but can't be used to break through bottlenecks? The effect is getting weaker and weaker, right?

When I saw the author's name, I thought 🐻🐺🐶 was double opened, but when I looked carefully it was 🐺🐻🐶

At first glance, I thought it was Bear Wolf Dog opening a new book 🙂

At present, all the people killed are small fish and shrimps, but the protagonist let go of a big fish. . . What kind of fratricidal tricks are there? . . Do you think you are writing a spy drama? Putting the failure of the cross-sea battle on a traitor? Who do you mean by traitor? Confrontation across the sea was changed to division and rule across the river. . . . Let's see if we can kill a few big ones before putting them on the shelves?

I thought there was a new game for Wolf Bear Dog, and I was wondering why it had changed so much, but it turned out to be Wolf Bear Dog, but it's not bad at all.

Can we use snacks? The author seems to be ready to cut it. How can you let us read it with peace of mind?

Fuck, I thought Xionglanggou invested without any brains and failed decisively 😭

I listened to it and missed every word, but I still didn't know what the protagonist was doing. I was so confused that I almost fell asleep.

I thought Bear Wolf Dog had opened a new book 😅

Readers of Bear Wolf Dog and Get Out, look at their previous works, do you think any of their paying readers like multiple female protagonists? Just think clearly about what readers want to see

Ah? I thought Bear Wolf Dog had published a new book

The title of the book is too hard to understand what it is about. And the description of the male protagonist is a bit obscure

I was passing by and I came from the countryside, and I was curious. I couldn't understand the title of the book from the introduction. What's the fun part about collecting this book?

Can "Multiple Heroines" and "Not Poisonous, Not Thunderous" appear at the same time? Am I illiterate or is the author illiterate?

Originally, I was a little suspicious of your arrogant and clumsy writing style, but it turns out that your style of just messing up without explanation is exactly the same as his, so I have to be suspicious🤨

The setting introduction is very good, why not write it down carefully?

The power system is still too old-fashioned and needs to have its own characteristics. In the last life, I discovered new heights. Next time, you can try Toad's combination method, which is similar to the combination of six exercises to form the Son of Demon King.

Eleven tickets are sent, and I hope the author will write better and better in the future.