Qingyuan Immortal Mansion

When I saw the second chapter and saw that there were ten levels of Qi training, and that there were level 2 demonic beasts that could compete with the middle and late stages of Qi training, I knew that this book was finished and could not be continued. Authors can innovate, but they cannot be careful. To put it bluntly, you have written well, but the two points I mentioned above will be ignored by the old bookworm as soon as he takes a look at them. 98% Of the Qi training period in Qidian Xiu Xianwen is divided into nine levels, and the monster beasts are divided into one level (qi training) and two levels (foundation building). The author writes this way, and some people read it, but very few follow it up. In the past, there was an author who messed around. He divided the realm from low to high into Qi Lian, Ji Zhu, Jin Dan, and Zi Mansion Great Monk. He wrote about 1 million words. It was a masterpiece. The comment section asked the author to make changes, but the author did not change. In the end, only 49 people read it.

If you're afraid that others will find out, you don't have to sell it. Buy some spiritual grass, spiritual fruit, tree, spiritual ginseng, etc. That can help your cultivation. Plant them and eat them yourself. It happens to be one day outside the fairy mansion and one year inside. It will be digested quickly and your cultivation will also increase quickly.

There are immortals, spiritual fields, and elixirs. If you don't refine elixirs, you don't dare to sell elixirs. Life is still tight, so what's the use of these immortals.

A golden finger like the Immortal Mansion is to hang on to unlimited resources. Get some seeds of elixirs that can boost your cultivation. Then wait for a certain year to harvest them. The entire Immortal Mansion will not be sold. Then you start to retreat. Anyway, one day outside and one year inside are not good for your own digestion. Even if you don't make elixirs, you will feed them so many elixirs. Isn't your cultivation level going up?

Did you write "Haoyu Zhenxian"?

What does the protagonist think? Wouldn't it be enough to just build a big warehouse and not sell it out? The main character is a pig brain. If it were me, I would plant all the seeds I can find. There are always surprises in life, and all supplies must be prepared. The resources in such a large space are extremely monotonous, with only one or two supplies. Fresh water, food, weapons, road driving, and water ferry, no matter whether they can be used or not, it is better to prepare them in advance to be prepared. Even if it is an ordinary big stone, as long as it is big enough, can it be used to block attacks? Under certain terrain conditions, tens of thousands of pounds of boulders fall from the sky, and any form of Qi refining or even foundation building has to be smashed into mud. If ten thousand pounds doesn't work, then one hundred thousand pounds will do. Quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes. Isn't it better than practicing spells hard? Isn't it better than the magic weapon you spent hundreds or even thousands of spiritual stones to buy? And the key is, it's cheap, isn't it?

It is so difficult to break through even though there are elixirs during the Qi training period. How to write it later? It is emphasized that the difficulty of breaking through due to poor qualifications also depends on the stage.

The whole world is staring at the male protagonist. The male protagonist is the core of the core. It is not popular to write like this now. It is too frustrating. You can watch it.

Isn't this how martial arts novels are written, chopping and slashing with weapons in hand? How did the author make money by writing novels about cultivating immortals? Isn't the martial arts novel section making money?

Be bold! You dare to ask for leave! The novel world is changing, great writers are emerging one after another, and new authors are flocking to the scene. As a small first-level new author, I publish less than ten chapters a day and have less than 10,000 words. How dare I take a leave of absence like others? From now on, I order you to squat in front of the computer if you don't want to die. Don't slack off for a minute. Take platinum as your belief and great god as your goal. Keep pushing yourself forward. Today is no exception under cheese.

The protagonist must be suppressed too hard. It takes more than a month to break through the fourth level of Qi training. He almost fainted while practicing a basic fireball technique. Even a loser can't be so useless.

How come the main character in the fairy tale is always Li Changqing, Immortality 😅 I'm tired of reading it

Don't be shocked, most first novels are the beginning of accumulating experience and improving your writing skills.

There is a guy named Liu Yu next to you, saying that you copied his plug-in 🙂

Is it a trail?😰

Audiences are tired of watching the old-fashioned show-off and slap-in-the-face sessions. The writing is not effortless, the rhythm is not as bland, and the long flow is intertwined. If you blindly want to attract attention and create slaps in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, the audience will be aesthetically tired. You guys still need to practice.

No one has written about fairy houses like Zifu Xianyuan anymore, hey

Please end Chen Ping's story first.

The story line of the work is clear, the characters are fully described, the writing is beautiful, and there are few typos. It is a good work and worth looking forward to. I hope it can be completed smoothly without any eunuchs.

8 monthly passes given

I saved up and ran away 😡

The classic protagonist has an aura of ridicule, so he just bites the protagonist

No, buddy, such a good subject is eunuch?