The Golden Toad Seeks the Dao

There's a plot point where someone forces a widow to cook for them and support them just to make the food better; this part is a bit inexplicable. We'll see how it goes later.

This is ridiculous! Cultivators can't cook, so why can't a transmigrator? They insist on writing it like they hire a widow to cook. What's wrong, author? Are you Wang Sicong or have you never cooked before?

One word: "awkward." Thirty-eight chapters were utterly boring. So many books, millions of words, yet your thinking is rigid, and your literary foundation shows no improvement. You can criticize me if you have no right to judge others, or what novels you've written. But after reading several of your books, I simply feel you haven't improved at all.

Write a novel similar to "I Am Everlasting in the Immortal Cultivation World," following the beast-taming and immortality genre, a direct copy, guaranteed to be a hit.

Judging by your terrible grades, you'll probably be castrated very soon.

The cheat system is well-designed; let's see how the treasure hunting area is determined.

All the comments are just attempts to belittle the author. Read if you want, don't read if you don't. Everyone's trying to teach the author how to write; what business is it of yours how they write? Are you all capable of writing your own books?

Yo yo yo, you've written a new book! Aside from the Beast Taming one, the quality of the others has dropped significantly.

Just stick to writing your family-themed novel, like the one about deserts and beast taming. Don't try to step out of your comfort zone and ride the coattails of others' popularity. Family-themed novels at least have a stable readership; although not many, they offer some security.

I still prefer reading Ziwei's family-based cultivation novels. I got hooked on cultivation novels starting with the desert setting, and then moved on to the Beast Taming Immortal Clan. Personally, I think the desert setting is the best. I hope Ziwei writes another great family-based cultivation novel. Judging from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, family-based novels still have a strong market.