Clan Cultivation: From the Start, I Have a Daoist Partner with a Heavenly Spiritual Root

I haven't started reading it yet. Look at the title. Can you keep this kind of wife with the best spiritual roots? If the descendants of the weak have more spiritual roots and have good spiritual roots, won't the world of the weak and the strong eat the immortals be dissected and studied? How can it be rounded?

The main character's behavior is far different from the one in Desert. I also used the outdated hot spot 🙂 and it felt like 200,000 pieces again.

This kind of subject matter is also difficult to deal with! Real

I invested 10,000 points, so be sure to finish writing it before cutting it off. It's best to write more about developing the family. I don't think the cultivating family can just fight and kill.

When I watched Desert, the main character knelt down to the supporting character, and my scalp went numb. When you wrote about the beast-controlling fairy clan, the main character knelt down to the supporting character. The main character had no charisma, and the supporting characters were not brilliant enough. It's hard to watch this kind of protagonist. There is nothing I can do about you dying. The other protagonists are all fooling around with me and I will help you ascend to immortality. Many characters that I thought were going to be outstanding were brought up in just a few strokes, and then they died when their longevity was gone. Except for the protagonists, all the books you studied were short-lived, and they were yours. The training system is too old. The training systems written by others are all self-created and you just copied them. Your protagonist has nothing outstanding except for using medicine to achieve breakthroughs. Others have gone through various hardships to achieve breakthroughs without taking medicine. You can actually mark out the scattered family resources you wrote about one by one. How many of them are acceptable? Your protagonist's time is worthless. It takes decades or hundreds of years to reach the same realm. Other protagonists have been asking for deity for decades. Your protagonist has been cultivating for decades or hundreds of years and kneels down to the supporting characters? Are you sure you're not kidding me?

As expected, I cut the book with less than 200,000 words. A outdated hot topic and a protagonist with bad conduct add up to a eunuch 🙂 When I first wrote Desert, the character of the protagonist was not upright, but he was still strong for his family, clan, and the world. Although the beast control was average, it was still readable. The next step was that the author committed the common problem of the first two books to make money and try to make fun of the mythical hot topics, resulting in the loss of readers. This one wanted to return to the original track, but it happened to be a hot topic and wrote about Tianlinggen. If you don't like it, who will?

If you invest, you won't write about it. Who will dare to invest in the future?

I've really confused myself into a fifth-rate writer...

I couldn't read the first dozen or so chapters. Why are all the emotional dramas in Ni Ni Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai, to be honest, not a romance novel? Many people have written about this track, but I have never seen anyone type it out. Only when you write about what you are good at and how you can express your true feelings can you go a long way. Emotional scenes can be written, but the whole thing is like kidnapping. To be honest, this opening is very dramatic.

Don't you know how to write anything other than waste material flow? Waste material flow, and now there is still a hairy person watching it