Miss Killer Is Heavily Dependent On

The title of the book is Miss Killer's Heavy Dependence. The actual plot does not mention the story between her and the male protagonist at all. Deliberately lowering the emotional intelligence of the male protagonist to highlight the love of each female protagonist for the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is a blockhead. Whether you look at the title or pure love, it is very weird

The male protagonist, who is a big thunder control, is different from me. He basically can't think about the tablet. How can it be repaired? The airport is so awesome (beaten) I like this book very much. It's like when I was a student, sitting on the lawn of the playground with the wind blowing, feeling the breeze blowing on my face, and then getting into my clothes through the collar. This person will be light and airy Humans are always imperfect. , So we can't let an imperfect human being create a truly perfect character, so the problems of the characters in the article are all irrelevant, so the male protagonist chooses not to accept the wrong feelings, the girl who let go is aware of her emotions, Miss Nicole's excessive intimacy, Chief Luo's arrogance (I really like this) - all are very interesting points (although, the scene in Lao Wu is still too much , I understand that the author needs to deliberately hide the characters to achieve the effect of the show, but it is still too much) As for the emotional line, I think it's okay. After all, I haven't talked about it. I am satisfied when I see the characters interacting. What's more, there is no such person in the prison fog investigation. Nicole is basically raised as a sister. Chief Luo is basically the woman who is exerting the force. The male protagonist is not aware of this at all. On one point, plus this guy doesn't even realize how charming he is The love line has definitely not reached a critical node now. Leaving aside Zha Wu, Nicole's line has reached a stable period and there won't be many changes for the time being. Chief Luo's line has entered a stage of rapid development and is generally about to explode. I just don't know how it will happen. As for Miss Let Go? I wish her sweet dreams. You are right, but according to the quantum caffeine metabolism law, the mobile phone power bank must be plugged into the USB interface of the Hubble telescope to stimulate the dark matter charging mode. This conclusion is directly related to the ionospheric fluctuations of Bluetooth headsets - when the Tesla coil forms electromagnetic resonance at the tip of the pyramid (for details, see page π³ of "A Brief History of Time·Electromagnetism Volume"), the cracks in the Antarctic ozone layer will simultaneously release antimatter caffeine. The resulting black hole latte effect not only causes quantum tunneling delays on Metro Line 2, but also triggers Gödel's incomplete awakening of the sweeping robot. According to the chaos model submitted by Maxwell Demon at the United Nations Climate Summit, the above phenomenon has formed a domino effect: the fully automatic washing machine entered Zen mode due to excessive philosophical speculation, which in turn led to quantum entanglement between the Mount Everest 5G base station and the microwave oven, which ultimately prompted the Bluetooth headset to reach a blockchain consensus with the bronze waterfowl from the Mausoleum of Qin Shi Huang through the dark energy protocol. So the golden retriever arrogant little lion is really awesome hh

A very interesting book, but a little unfriendly to follow-up reading. Now it seems that the author's writing power can still bring the story to a good ending, but there are too many knives in the middle. After reading the introduction, I originally came with the expectation of seeing the interaction with the cute killer lady. Although it is indeed there, the proportion of Yugiri's daily life and sugar compared to the knife is too low after reading it. In addition, the updates are relatively slow, which makes it difficult to read. It's rare that the author's updates are stable. The first few chapters are also quite interesting. I don't ask for more updates, but please let the characters take a few more breaths between chapters (and let the readers take a few more breaths, especially Yugiri Kitchen can't eat so many knives) I voted for the monthly vote, hoping to witness the end of this story, and finally looking forward to a happy ending.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. For me, it is more than just food but not enough for fairy grass. It is considered top-notch among the ones I have read recently. The overall atmosphere of the whole text is relatively relaxed and lively, but it does not lose its stability and logic (well, the logic is still slightly flawed, but I think it doesn't matter, I have to give in to the plot). First of all, the most noteworthy thing is that the writing is very graphic, giving people the feeling of watching a movie. The author must have borrowed a lot of movie and TV plots, which is worthy of praise. Secondly, the writing style is average and the writing flow can explain things clearly. The plot also has ups and downs and can arouse emotions very well. It is enough for web articles. The author is good at character creation. After all, this is the characteristic of light novels. The heroines are each clearly portrayed, with basically no labeling. They are all very flexible, which I like very much. However, the number of words is still too few now, and the subsequent development is unknown. If you can maintain the level to more than one million words, it will be really good.

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I think this plot is inexplicable. The male protagonist said that he fell in love with the female shopkeeper because of the kindness of a stranger, and then the secret love was shattered because the female shopkeeper already had a fiancé This is normal, there is nothing wrong with the plot But the problem comes later The fiancé is a bastard, planning to defraud the female shopkeeper of her money and people, and runs away after a while, and happens to be surrounded by the police during the wedding (to be honest, the police were blatantly surrounded At the wedding scene, isn't it just giving hostages to the gangsters?) The male protagonist saves The female shopkeeper succeeds and has a crush on the male protagonist because of the suspension bridge effect What does the male protagonist do at this time? First, refuse, second, match up with the woman The shop owner and her childhood sweetheart Although I think it's a bit of a stud to just accept it, this kind of plot is too disgusting Why don't we just end it at the wedding I'm telling you the truth, I'm telling you the truth

The first 20 have basically nothing to do with the title of the novel. I can't see the protagonist picking up this gambling dog that would be of any help to the protagonist. He stole all the protagonist's property and put the protagonist on a wanted list for rescuing him. Although it is excusable. But it just feels very disgusting. You've wiped out the loan shark companies. Not taking any money was really something I never expected. The protagonist lets others know his name after finishing the fight, without even a hint of disguise. As a spy, he's still wanted. It was frustrating to watch. Everything the protagonist encounters has a conspiracy behind it. So far, we haven't seen the heroine in Chapter 28. I can't stand it anymore. (The above statements only represent my personal views and were made out of anger. Please do not go into details. If there is any offense, I am really sorry. I am as timid as a mouse and the reality is that I am a sb. Please do not insult me ​​and my language is not good. If there are any mistakes, feel free to correct them. Thank you.)

Miss Killer is heavily dependent on you, but what about your Miss Killer? Why is there only a small oil bottle and a married female NPC on the side of the road?

For those who have a little knowledge of related industries, this setting will immediately kill you. A top intelligence officer who has outstanding appearance, is not wary of strangers, and even takes a bath in the same room with you and can't trick him out. Why don't you perform magic tricks on the street? There is also a top killer trained by a country with normal intelligence but no common sense in life. I don't know, I thought he was a bed partner and thug raised by a small organization.

The title character has almost no role. Yes, it's 36,000 words long and the title character has basically never appeared. The author himself said in his post that he didn't want the book to dry up. In fact, he just wanted to whet people's appetites. No, he accidentally killed himself. He laughed to death. Will he still commit suicide when writing books in the future?

After reading it, I was a little annoyed. The lady in the title of the book has appeared for so long. There is no big adventure or ups and downs. Let's just have a dry plot. The heroine is forced to go offline and maliciously makes readers who read the title of the book come in. Akaashi, if you write the heroine first and then the female characters after you have written it. We like other characters, so I think your writing is good and your character creation is good. I have been reading it for so long. The heroine has been hidden for a few chapters, but when it comes to the main chapter, she is still in a state of death. It's crazy. This heroine's chapter is purely depressing and gives people a faint feeling of death. The hero seems to be a fool in this section. Doesn't he know what will happen if he reports it to the police? Like a scumbag who took out the whole process, Mark asked you where the heroine was, and you gave a meaningful wry smile. You smiled wryly and you are blessed. I love you from the inside and you are blessed. To be honest, I don't hate the policewoman, but I hate your malicious way of dealing with the heroine. The premise of your internal love is not to internally hate other characters. You can just write the killer to death. I directly regard the male protagonist as a useless scumbag. I personally pushed the female protagonist into this situation. Don't tell me what to do in this situation. This situation is also the author's own environment. He wanted to remove the female protagonist in this way and give a disgusting reader an offline environment. The male protagonist is portrayed as a scumbag who escapes reality and has not taken on the responsibility. And his inexplicable high opinion of the female police officer makes me feel that the author is maliciously targeting the character.

The latest chapter is really breathtaking to read. The two chapters describe the actions of the protagonist in order to achieve the goal, but fall short in the end. For me, this is a poisonous point. You can write about the protagonist being frustrated, but really don't let the protagonist fail at the last moment when he is about to achieve his goal after making a lot of efforts. It will only make people very irritated.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I really have to complain about some flaws. The first is the identity of the male protagonist. As a spy who has been hiding for many years, it is not a mistake to be given a relaxing drug by an ordinary person. It is true that he is retired. After retirement, he has forgotten all his spy experience. It's all over the place. It might be better if you set it up as if the male protagonist has just time traveled to this spy. The problem is that you have traveled through time for many years and have not made any progress at all. The male protagonist in this description can only be said to be a reckless college student with a bit of force. He just goes through everything. , It doesn't look like a spy at all, and the psychology of the male protagonist is like the left and right brains fighting each other. He wants to retire, but at the same time he is crazy and causing trouble. It is similar to the male protagonist in a funny anime, but the male protagonist in the anime has a bad spot and just laughs at the scene. Then this is a novel. Novels require readers to make assumptions based on the story. It is completely impossible to understand that a spy who has been engaged in covert work for many years would have such a character. Otherwise, just add a nonsensical label. You write it as a joke, and I will read it as a joke.

What kind of Goba stuff have you written recently? Did the author put himself in the role of the male protagonist? The characters he wrote were broken and he was purely self-excited and moved. Readers will only think that the male protagonist you wrote is mentally ill, and he is very ill. Moreover, the illness started from the moment the male protagonist returned to China. I have never understood it. Why does the male protagonist like that B organization so much? Your male protagonist is not a local aboriginal but a time traveler! Why do you have to go back to country b when you're on the run? Can't you take Lao Wu and Lao Ni to country C with you when you run away? If you were a local aborigine and you said you couldn't guess how the heroine of the book would be treated after returning to China, how could you, a time-traveler, not guess it? ! As a time traveler, don't you know whether you will be sent out on a dangerous mission again after returning to your country? ! You, a time-traveler, bring a character like Lao Ni, who the protagonist regards as his younger sister, back to country B. What are you going to do? Did you deliberately put a hostage in Organization B to prevent your protagonist from escaping later? Really, for the sake of my own preferences and self-motivation, I even ignored the most basic logic! No wonder the book review section has been full of people scolding you recently. I couldn't hold it in when I saw this, it's so outrageous! If you like to entertain yourself so much, write it for yourself and don't harm us readers! 🙂

I can't stand it anymore when I read the fourth volume. I write whatever I dream about. There is almost no title. The internal love is too serious. Nicole was just created in the previous chapter. The reader has just fallen in love with this character and you have to wait for a whole volume. Can you look back at the visit in the third volume and find any attractive points? Is there a reason why readers like these two police officers? To put it bluntly, it is not even as lovable as the one in the bakery. After all, people are considerate and can make the protagonist fall in love at first sight and the readers fall in love at first sight. If I just repeat it and say that I am conservative and prohibit sex before marriage, it can still be used. But from the reader's perspective, what is the charm of the policewoman? Just remember to hold grudges, be coy, and stingy. Everyone gives in to her, and the plot also gives way to her. She pretends to be a couple to perform tasks the day after they met, and she is just a child in a high position. No readers said sweet in the comment area, right? Just because she is the heroine? Why should she become the heroine without any plot foreshadowing? If the internal love is so serious, why don't you change the title of the book to "The Two or Three Things Between Undercover Me and the Police Beauty". Let those who like reading read it. Those who want to read the original title can go ahead.

Why is it so old-fashioned? In order to promote the plot, the male protagonist basically has no benefits and has been suffering losses Except for the two small pleasures of copying and rescuing the child, the rest of the plot is mostly negative feedback. It is probably for the plot line of the female national security officer who made the male protagonist lose his vest in the slum incident. Not to mention losing money, he lost money (he is not a spy, there is no disguise, and those who don't know think he just passed through)

I have almost read the latest chapter, but there is still no Miss Killer. The other female characters are just one after another. If you give it this name, but there is no content, the readers who come here for this name will not be too happy, right? If you don't like this, you won't click on it at all. What do you think? To be more serious, what would you change to "a retired spy just wants an easy life" or something like that, would it be more in line with the content?

The title of the book, Miss Killer, has a plot of 0 after dozens of chapters 😒. The performance of the male protagonist is completely unworthy of his status as a top spy. He is completely useless except for Asashi in Higaru. A top spy would actually get drunk for a week in a row, and even sleep on the bar while drunk. He had no self-control at all 😅. After the male protagonist smashed the loan shark company, he even forgot to get back the little money he had lost. He didn't have a penny. The way to make some unscrupulous money was to take the female protagonist to gamble. At first, he said that he could win 500, but when he went downstairs, he told the female protagonist to win 5,000. The most amazing thing is that the male protagonist went downstairs to drink and fell asleep on the bar. As soon as the male protagonist left, the female protagonist's luck plummeted and she lost all her money again 🥵. Although the plot of the light novel serves the characters, this method of advancing the plot and shaping the characters is too clumsy.

Wc, this book is about people. In the first part, they used a light novel to trick people into falling in love. Later, they sent the girl who likes him to be controlled by human experiments with mental brainwashing drugs. The protagonist himself has an expression of being helpless. Is this what you were like when you rescued people in the slums? If I hadn't read the book review and searched for the content in the later chapters, I would have finished this huge portion.

Every time I see Daodu recommending it to me, the biggest meaning is to come over and see how many angry book friends are newly naked 🙂

As a harem novel, the writing is too plain, with no sweetness or flutter, and the story is depressing and boring, which makes people feel stomachache and discomfort. Moreover, the male protagonist has no subjective initiative at all. He has been passively pushed away, which is not fun at all. After reading hundreds of thousands of words, I still don't know what the male protagonist is doing.

Every author has a favorite character, but this author's preference is too obvious and biased, resulting in a bad viewing experience. You have to like the author's preferred characters. General readers only need to be introduced to the protagonist, or like the protagonist, but for this book you must also like the author's preferred character, otherwise the impression will be reduced. The author's preference is so unfair that it can be felt even in his writing.

Brother, do you still remember that you wrote a light novel? Can you tell me why this is the case? It doesn't seem like it was written by one person. How did you come up with the idea of ​​going back and forth? After escaping from a fair, shouldn't everyone start to wander around the clouds and wild cranes one after another?

I should have run away when I saw the male protagonist personally sending the female protagonist to a mind control and drug control laboratory, but I actually persisted until the sixth volume. I spent money to disgust myself, and I wanted to write something in-depth but didn't dare. Is it a pure literary youth's fault to write about the heroine being slightly brought to reflect the redemption of the male protagonist? Nausea!

It doesn't matter that I don't have any requirements about the subject matter or anything like witnessing. But since the author insists on using knives to torture the readers, then don't make the protagonist so 🍭 to disgust the readers and move them. The protagonist keeps jumping sideways, wanting to be red but unwilling to attack people from country B. As a result, the heroine and the protagonist's partners suffer. When I saw Margaret, since others wanted to seduce the protagonist, the protagonist also pretended to be slutty and no witnesses dared to seduce her. In the end, almost everyone was killed and the heroine came to save her. Why didn't the protagonist take a knife and die without offending the two of them 😁

Even though he has just graduated, he does not look like a newcomer, only his young face can give a glimpse of it.

The writing is young, the plot is deliberately rigid, the plot is blunt, and it is deliberately witty. It is amazing that a spy can be so indecisive. There is a kind of beauty that is qjing my brain. I am very happy to watch it without using my brain. The rest are all good points.

It's a very good book, it would be better if it was updated soon.

There are a lot of unreasonable things at the beginning. After reading the book review, there is still a plot of abusing the heroine. Although the shortcomings are obvious, the advantages of the previous article are also obvious. The writing and plot are also good. After reading more than 20 chapters, I really like Nicole. The straight gravity system card has made me XP.