Mortal Chaos Embryo

The protagonist is a pure nanny, and the old demon Han can't make alchemy, nor can he fight and kill. The cautiousness that belongs to the low-level ants is gone. The protagonist's character is very suitable for the old demon, but he is on the wrong path. Just provide knowledge and don't interfere too much with his growth.

Look at Han Li who can give up his parents, brothers and wife, let alone other people. He only has interests and no brotherhood. If he takes the earth's lifestyle and gives it to a mortal, he can't live for more than a month.

The changes were too outrageous. What the fanfic focuses on is the impact on the characters. The author directly deleted the important characters in the original work. Mo Caihuan disappeared, and Mo Wanshuang appeared, but Tianlinggen was still there. Nangong Wan went crazy and died, and a younger sister Nangong Yue came out. She was really speechless. It was interesting to read the first 20 chapters, but then the characters were magically changed and I couldn't stand it anymore. What you write is a fanfic. This kind of character modification is definitely poisonous and will discourage readers. I really don't understand why the author wrote it like this. The author's writing style is good, and I also like the idea of ​​​​cultivation, but the character magic modification is really useless, which is a pity.

I found that after I don't know who invented the word "self-green", Su Hui was awakened at every turn. The so-called awakening of Su Hui is that the indigenous protagonist has obtained the so-called past life memory, but the protagonist is still an indigenous person. It's not going to be time travel or rebirth, it's just that the natives have gained a memory. If you write that the aborigines were affected by this memory, and their behavior is the same as that of this memory, wouldn't that be soul-piercing? Is there a difference? Why bother? True fetal transmutation is when you know you have traveled through time when you were pregnant, rather than awakening Su Hui. I don't even know who invented the word "self-green". The ordinary world may not be able to change the body's genes. But in the fantasy world of immortality, the soul of a powerful person transforms his body and combines his essence and spirit with his body. Why is his body no longer his own? Why did it turn green? So speechless

Single and long, no? If you don't reply, there will be a pitfall by default.

The direction is exactly the same as the original work, there are just multiple people

Too licking, no wonder I got bad grades

The protagonist traveled through time just to become an old slave? It's really a cowhide plush.

It takes five hundred spirit stones to find out information about casual cultivators, but a month of ordinary Qi training seems to cost two spirit stones.

First of all, if you want to give the protagonist such a treasure, you should write it more reasonably. Don't press the protagonist hard while blowing the golden finger. The golden finger can collect and deduce, or directly understand it, and it can be innovated. As a result, you get an immortal cultivation qigong method, and you need to deduce other attributes. Why does it need the laws of the fairy world? What nonsense, can a qi training thing have anything to do with the laws of the fairy world? First, you can't live forever and increase your lifespan, and second, you can't even fly (fly by yourself)  Second, Goldfinger can scan and copy the treasures of the fairy world, but in the end, even a treasure of the foundation-building family cannot be copied. How much do you look down on the treasures of the fairy world? Not to mention the treasures of the fairy world, even a thing at the top of the rankings in the spiritual world can trigger a real spirit war. The sun and moon in the spiritual world are not beaten, let alone the foundation-building family's things in the human world. This is not suppressed The most important thing in writing a book is to be reasonable. Since you want to write such a golden finger, don't press hard. You can use other words. If you look at other famous books, which one became famous by pressing hard and extremely unreasonably? Whether the protagonist is greedy for money, lustful, vicious, pretentious, or something else, this is a shortcoming and an advantage, depending on how you write it.

I can't stand it anymore, I've become a wet nurse

I thought I was going to create my own martial arts and enter Taoism through martial arts, but in the end I ended up cultivating immortality through the spirit root stream. And very licking too.

Didn't the author learn how to use punctuation?

The settings of the original work have been changed a lot, some of which make people want to quit.

After seeing Chapter 41, "Nangong Yue" is at least an important character. I hope the author can write it more vividly. Farewell to the harem, the harem immediately abandoned the book.

The trajectory is exactly the same as the original 🙂

The author turned on the devil! Once the Yuanling Reincarnation Technique is launched, there may no longer be a way for the Heavenly Spiritual Root to survive in the world! Alas!

Many people are debating whether to have a harem heroine, a bunch of brats, of course not a heroine, just have a woman, why? Do I have to be responsible for sleeping? What kind of child psychology? I am a demonic monk, a bunch of virgin children.

I like this fanfic very much. I don't know why those people gave negative reviews.

Not bad, I feel that the rare emotions are very delicately portrayed, especially the one with Ling Yuling. It's very sweet and not weird. Please give me more details 010

Nangong Wan, Nie Ying, Hong Fu, Ni Shang, Dong Xuan'er, Senior Sister Chen, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Ling Yuling, Zi Ling, Wang Yun, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, etc. Were all accepted.

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment!

Cheers, author. The writing is very good. I love it.

It's really weird. Nangong Wan went crazy and died, giving birth to Nangong Yue.

Not coming out? Waited so long

Much better looking than most of the fans, especially the self-created exercises have a bit of a scientific feel to cultivating immortality~