Just as I Prepare for the College Entrance Exam, the Fallen Top-Tier Star Makes a Comeback

After seeing the plot of the game, I couldn't stand it anymore! The plot is as vulgar as it was ten years ago. Withdrawn

A punishment system that is rare these days. If you don't learn how to get electric shocks, if you don't play the guitar quickly, you will get electric shocks...

It's right to have bad grades. After it was put on the shelves, it looked ugly and its writing level plummeted. Learning to be a master of literature is not a master of literature. Urban literature is not urban literature. Entertainment literature is not entertainment literature. Don't stick to the three.

I stopped watching it. The more I watched it, the more boring it became. I was attracted by the campus life in the early stage. It was originally a campus story about ordinary students' counterattack against youth, but later on it suddenly turned into a protagonist with a rich family background. Going to college turned into an exciting story about starting a business. It became more and more boring.

In order to urge myself not to be lazy, I wrote a post as evidence. Ten thousand words updated every day! The first phase lasts for one hundred days! Start counting today!

The previous one is okay, at least the main line is clear. Later, after college, I began to immerse myself in self-release, and I couldn't distinguish the priorities. I felt that in the end the protagonist became a robot cat, able to solve everything, and at the same time, I gave the greatest benefit to others, and I only wanted to help? Business hegemony? Not like; college sweetheart? It's not like that; it's a bit different, and it looks like I'm losing my IQ!

Around Chapter 170, the two main characters are still trying to get along with each other. I really can't stand it anymore if my three views don't change.

The beginning of the book is okay, but the more you read to the end, the more tired you become. From the previous relaxed and enjoyable systematic text, it suddenly turned into an old-fashioned financial business war. I can't say it's poorly written, I can only say it's not what everyone wants to see. I'll see you in the next book.

The high school part is classified as grain and above. Both the plot and writing are pretty good, and there are no logical flaws. It is recommended But there are some problems in the summer college part On the one hand, it is the grasp of details. The author wants to transfer the Pokémon IP, but in the arcade city chapter, he writes that there is Pikachu in the claw machine. Uh, no, when you write it yourself, do you code without thinking about what elements are repeated? On the other hand, it is a business issue. The author is trying to start a business with the top IP Bubble Mart and Genshin Impact? Zelda? Open world? Player community mall? Well, the stitching is a bit outrageous, giving me a sense of déjà vu that I want to make my own innovation but can't. The plot of the game club gives people a strong feeling that the summer copy is upgraded too fast to be grasped, and the campus script is forced to restart Here I suggest you learn how to write other rebirth stories about the dual advancement of campus careers. You are taking this step too far.

The writing about high school doesn't look like a school, it looks like a sect in a fantasy novel, which is too unconventional.