Reborn in 1982: I Can See Other People's Futures

The author's values ​​are utterly warped! The master's daughter is traumatized because her boyfriend cheated on her, and the author actually thinks that no man would like a woman who is too persistent. Is this something a human being would say?

The narrative needs to be concise; I found it very verbose when listening to audiobooks. Let's remove the obsession in Chapter 31. To put it another way, as a reader, I dislike plots that get out of control. Don't even mention the obsession from the previous life; it's a major flaw.

The first chapter is discouraging; I've found it really hard to connect with the characters on Qidian these days without an orphanage.

Where's the family affection? Someone from another time. Since dividing the family is unfair, let's just divide it up in vain. Doesn't it seem contradictory? No wonder it's so unpopular. The beginning was unclear.

The first chapter mentioned some melodramatic family division, which made me think there was some unfair distribution of assets specifically designed to torment the male lead. But there wasn't any! It was just because he was pregnant and needed to move in—it was just an objective situation. His family treated him quite well, so giving him a little leeway wasn't a big deal. Besides, his older brother and parents tried their best to compensate him, as if he had suffered some great injustice.

Separation and family division, or a systemic text from a bygone era.

You've already been reborn, what the hell do you need a system for? Unless you're brain-dead, a reborn person can easily become a tycoon. Register a bunch of companies on some random islands with your overseas wealth, then cross-shareholdings, and set up another company in China to hire yourself and pay your salary every month. It's so awesome! Put all your real estate, luxury cars, and stuff under the company, and nobody can do anything to you!

This author is truly terrible! Typos are a minor issue; it's this incoherent narrative that's truly baffling! They have the general ability to tell a story, but their writing skills are awful! My personal suggestion is to slow down the writing pace; if that's not possible, at least use AI to summarize and refine it! Look, it's even free for a limited time! What does it mean that a book with millions of words is free? It means this book is basically ruined! It has no future!

The very first chapter is poisonous! The protagonist starts off penniless, separated from his family, and forced to sleep in a warehouse, and the protagonist even understands and comforts himself about the original owner's family? I think the author is truly starved for love!!!

I'm so awesome, give me something good when you're offering freebies for a limited time!