Reborn in 1982: I Can See Other People's Futures

The author's views are extremely incorrect! The master's daughter was stimulated by her boyfriend's cheating. The author actually thinks that even men won't like women who are too persistent. Is this what people say?

The narrative needs to be concise. I felt it was very wordy when listening to the book. Delete the obsession in Chapter 31. In other words, as a reader, I don't like plots where I lose control the most. Don't even mention the obsession in the previous chapter. It's a poisonous point. Originally, the previous description of integrating into a family after time travel was very natural, but your obsession with it detracts a lot of points. I don't think there is any problem with other things. The chronicle must be explained slowly. In addition, the main line must be clear. Do you want to develop in the factory, become a high-level person step by step, or go into business and become a rich man? There must be a focus. At present, the main line is a bit vague, which makes me as a reader less expectant, so that the plot is a bit boring to read, and it all depends on the system to push out small plots. Come on, author!

Chapter 1: Dissuade me from quitting. I find it is really difficult to move into an orphanage now that I don't have a starting point.

Where does the family affection come from? A person from time travel. Since it is unfair to divide the family, it will be lonely. Seems contradictory? No wonder the popularity is low. It was not clear from the beginning

Chapter 1 said about the bloody separation of families. I thought there was some unfair distribution. There was no one who specifically cheated the male protagonist. It was just an objective situation that he had to move in because he was pregnant. The family was pretty good to the male protagonist. A little concession was nothing. Moreover, the eldest brother's parents also tried their best to compensate. It sounded like he had been wronged a lot.

Separate family pulls, or chronological system document

You are reborn and you still need a stupid system. Unless you are reborn, it is not a big problem to become a rich man. Foreign wealth registers a lot of companies on some messy islands, and then cross-shares each other, and then sets up a company in China to hire yourself every month and pay your own salary. Don't be too happy. All real estate, luxury cars, etc. Are all linked to companies, and no one can do anything to you!

This author is so good! Typos are a trivial matter, but the confusing narrative ability is really speechless! I have the general ability to tell stories, but my writing skills are terrible! Personally, I suggest you write slower. If that doesn't work, you can use AI to summarize and refine it! Look, they're all free! What does it mean to be exempted from writing a few million words? This shows that this book is basically useless! There is no future!

The poison was released in the first chapter. The protagonist was separated from his family at the beginning and was driven to a warehouse to sleep. The protagonist still understands that the family of the original owner can comfort himself? I think you, the author, are really in need of love! ! !

I'm super powerful. Please give me something good for free.