Douluo: Food System? My Soup Is Sold All over the World!

Finally, someone wrote about this food system, spiritual food, elixir effects, iron-clad support, and flowing C

However, when Douluo engages in the Heavens, I think the most important points to pay attention to are the issue of combat power and effects (after all, everyone knows about fantasy sewers) Sold the protagonist's things to the Heavens can help the guy improve through the conversion of a golden finger. The effect can't be conceptual, right?

Yes, it is really good to separate the food system and the auxiliary system, and Douluo really can't play with numerical values ​​​​in the heavens. If you can't be a numerical monster, then become a mechanical monster. It's a great idea. Come on! Come first at the beginning of the month.

No, you exposed your soul in the first three chapters? I even gave one to Duguyan

Can the strength of the fantasy sewer world of Douluo support the protagonist's abnormal soup skills?

There's no need to have any rights, right? The protagonist's twenty-odd awakenings are inexplicable, so shouldn't the first reaction be that he is not strong enough? In the small world of Douluo, the protagonist does not need to be omniscient and omnipotent. He can just scan the entire world with one thought. What kind of layout is useful? If you had known earlier, the outcome of a chess game sometimes lies beyond the chessboard, so don't consider yourself a chess piece, right? A strong enough chess player never cares about the layout of the chess pieces, it just adds a little fun to the boring chess life.

The idea is okay. This idea can be rewritten. Your combat power and plot are basically broken now. I am pessimistic about how far I can write in the future.

The innate soul power is a bit outrageous, either 8 or 9, and there are still full soul powers. The gold in the Soul Palace, which has very few geniuses in the original, is not full soul power. Do you, a casual 8-9 person, know what the concept is? Contra is making steady progress, but the best soul ring is casually banned

No, Dou Yi, you, a one-ring soul master, give your soul to others, is that what you write?

Chapters 66 to 68 were written in such a sudden way. As title

To be fair, I wrote about 40 to 50 chapters for this competition, so I skipped reading it completely. I didn't want to read the content even after looking at the title 😒

Watching, watching, feeling, feeling a little bit, where is the rhythm of your plot? It's all about improvement, but what about the story? What about the ups and downs of the plot, or the pretense and slap in the face?

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Endless Shennong, come out! ! !

First of all, it is certain that the author's setting of the food system, the once-a-day auction is okay, but it is obvious that the author has no experience in writing large worlds, and the setting is a bit too big. The value setting of things like souls is too low, which allows the protagonist's ability to increase rapidly and has an increasing impact on the plot. At this rate, it will soon collapse unless the author The author should write later about transcending all the worlds, or go behind the scenes and start to transform Dou Yi's world. At the same time, the author should describe Douluo's supporting characters in more detail, such as Duguyan, Ye Linlin, Oscar,... The personalities and ways of doing things of these characters, and arrange some small plots for them... These can not only reduce the number of words, but also deepen the image and bond the readers.

Douluo's soul skills are random and cannot be decided by the soul master himself. Killing the same kind of soul beast can produce different skills. If you want to add training buffs, God will give you temporary attack bonuses. This path will only work if there are souls who can choose their own soul skills. Moreover, other auxiliary systems can also choose this type of skill. The food system can sustain itself even if it requires eating. Other auxiliary systems can directly add training buffs to the light, and can add many more buffs than the food system. The most important thing is that the protagonist has a plug-in called the auction house, which allows the food system across the continent to work for him.

Will there be many original plots and characters in Douluo Dalu after it is released? Don't dare to order.

I feel like I'm a little overwhelmed, but the creativity is very good.

? Is that the end?

It's so disgusting before it's released, what a genius

The elixir of immortality has been around for more than 4 million years. It's so miserable that it has been hacked. A trace of its essence is almost enough.

How can one write about so many women without a female protagonist...

The writing is too complicated and makes me uncomfortable to read.

Forget it, just one chapter a day for the first two days. It would be a bit disgusting if Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor became a food-type martial spirit. If that were the case, I would give up.

The author can turn Tang San into two people, one male and one female, to separate the martial spirits

If this plug-in auction was unique to the protagonist and ten items were randomly refreshed every day, every week, every month, and every year for the protagonist to purchase, I would still continue to read it, but I really can't stand it as I write it.

Not enough😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫

Shouldn't the levels be the first is the largest and the ninth is the smallest?

The flaw in Ge Zhao's theory proposed in this book is that the soul ring skills are random and the skill effects cannot be determined, and the main position of the food soul master is said in the original book to be the logistics for legion operations.

Why don't you click Finish?