High Martial: Becoming the Master of the Universe Through Hard Work

This book has no flaws whatsoever; all its imperfections are insignificant compared to the sheer volume of 50,000 words per day!

Chapter 148: The Fearless Legion, to which the protagonist joins, issues a team-up request: 70 points + 3 perfect killing techniques The text states that the vast majority of new members in the battle groups cannot meet the requirements, yet the requirements for the four main characters to join the battle group were mentioned earlier: 1. Physical potential requirement: Level 1 Golden Human

The beginning was alright, but starting from the university section, various logical flaws and data errors appeared. The premise also seemed to be contradictory, with the settings from the first few chapters being forgotten later on. 😒

The system is excellent, combining elements of Warhammer, high-powered weaponry, and Devouring Star. However, perhaps due to too many updates, there are many minor issues and a lack of attention to detail. Most importantly, the protagonist's combat power is very weak, regardless of how strong his killing techniques are (mastery level) or how strong his physical body is (such as surpassing golden…

A character with 500+ health points can't beat someone with 600. What's the point of the protagonist's Control Realm and that incredibly powerful invincible physical body? And that freshman competition—tens of millions of applicants and only the protagonist reaches the Control Realm? Were all the strongest geniuses from each planet stuck at the Perfect Realm? Sorry, but it's really awkward and illogical. The beginning was well-written, but the later parts are incredibly padded.

The protagonist acts too impulsively, and the progression of his character is problematic. He's constantly driven by anger; if it weren't for the Chosen Emperor, he would have become the Chosen of Khorne long ago. He's angry at the killing of civilians, angry at the serious injury of his friends, and angry at the traitorous Stoneblood. It's not that you can't be angry, but you have to have limits.

Holy crap, 40,000 words a day?! I don't know about others, but this is the most outrageous thing I've personally seen on Qidian.com.

While browsing the rankings, I suddenly discovered this book. It was published in June and now has 2.4 Million words. What kind of nonsense is this, updating 50,000 words a day? Is this even possible for a human?

The biggest mistake is the lack of effective killing techniques. In the senior year of high school, when we were competing in the Star Tournament, we realized that we needed to learn more killing techniques, but we didn't. In college, each technique costs 50 contribution points and it takes several months of hard work to learn just one. Learning a few killing techniques in high school is equivalent to working hard for several years in college to earn contribution points.

Having read up to chapter 18, with the protagonist's grades, the homeroom teacher was able to invest 500,000 yuan, yet the school didn't contribute a single penny? In reality, which high school wouldn't reward students who achieve scores high enough to get into Tsinghua or Peking University?