High Martial: Becoming the Master of the Universe Through Hard Work

There is no evil point in this book, and all flaws are not worth mentioning in front of 50,000 a day!

In Chapter 148, the fearless war group that the protagonist joins internally announces the team requirements: 70 points + 3 perfect killing methods This requirement actually says in the article that most of the freshmen of the war group cannot meet the conditions, but the requirements for the four protagonists to join the war group mentioned above are: 1. The physical potential requires Golden Human Level 1 2.6 Perfect killing methods or 1 controlled killing method. It stands to reason that everyone in the war group meets the requirements. What is going on here? Also, the protagonist learned two killing methods in high school, and then contributed 50 to one course after going to college. It was so expensive. Why didn't the protagonist learn a few more courses in high school? Don't tell me that this is a lack of information. There is no way those teachers in high school who are very good to the protagonist don't know these things. Currency system, the protagonist's B-level contract in high school was initially equivalent to 3 million in currency per month, with an increment of 1 million per month, and then the reward of a general star was only 10 million, which was not enough for the protagonist to spend in one month on the battlefield. Of course, the currency system is prone to problems, and the author can be forgiven for this. There are some smaller poisonous points that I can't remember clearly, but the general framework of the novel is good. For example, high school is not divided into grades according to time, but according to strength, and you can graduate early. There are many interesting innovations, but the details always feel a bit wrong. Generally speaking, I don't know if this is an AI article. Maybe the author has his own idea of ​​the general framework of each chapter, and then relies on AI to fill in the details? Only then can we achieve large-volume and full-scale updates? If so, I hope the author can carefully review each chapter and let AI write it, so that he still has the energy to revise and revise it. If not, then I hope the author can take a good look at the previous chapters he wrote. It seems that he has swallowed the settings many times. You can read it, but the reading experience is like eating a few pieces of ginger occasionally when eating braised pork.

What I wrote before was okay, but when I started in college, there were various logic loopholes, data errors, and the settings were a battle between the left and right brains. I forgot about the settings in the first few chapters 😒

The system is very good, combining elements such as Warhammer, High Martial Arts, Swallowing the Starry Sky, etc. But I don't know if there are too many updates, resulting in insufficient details and many small problems... The most important thing is that the protagonist's combat power is very strong. It is not important to know how strong the protagonist's killing method is (control level), and how strong his body is (what is beyond the golden human, the physique of the starry sky giant beast cub) As long as the life index of others is higher than the protagonist High... I can't beat it at all... It's not like the monster described in the book at all... It's just a very ordinary description of a genius, just a fast cultivation speed 🤤 No killing method, physical fitness, and experience are of any use. It gives people the feeling that the world is based on the life index... And the timeline spans too fast, and the early stage is all at once Years and decades have passed... To be honest, there is no daily life at all... Just like the high school before, there are still images. When my cousin goes to high school, he can write about his daily life and add an easter egg or something. It will be interesting, and it is obviously a foreshadowing... As a result, time speeds up, and my cousin and the others have become hundreds of adults... As a whole, in addition to cultivation, it is cultivation... And they also emphasize the need to seize the time. Practice... Then why don't you participate in the Rookie Cup for the third time... You practice in seclusion to enlighten yourself as soon as possible... Participate in the third Rookie Cup, get rewards for free, and quickly enlighten yourself (probably to 270) (you don't need to spend a few days to gain free contribution points, but you have to spend several months and years to complete tasks, right...) The writing is very contradictory... I saw around 160 It's so tiring that I can't get enough energy to read any more

More than 500 health points can't beat 600. What's the use of Pig's Foot's Control Realm and that awesome invincible body? There's also the freshman competition. Tens of millions of people came out to Pig's Feet to have a Control Realm. They are all the strongest geniuses on each planet and they all got stuck in the Perfection Realm. Sorry, it looks awkward and unreasonable. What's written well in the front is really watery in the back.

The protagonist is too motivated, and the progress of the protagonist is problematic. The protagonist is impulsive and angry all the time. If it weren't for the Emperor's Chosen, he would have become the Chosen of Khorne. He was angry when he saw civilians being killed, he was angry when he saw his friends being seriously injured, he was angry when he saw the blood of the Stone Clan who were like traitors. It's not that you can't be angry, but you have to be angry in a certain way. The protagonist can be motivated, but cannot be completely motivated. Otherwise, you'd better join Khorne. Also, it is said that only generals from each planet in the protagonist university can come, but when I look at the people from other universities, they are not much different, and they do not show their superiority at all. . .

Can I update 40,000 yuan a day? ! I don't know about others, but this is the most outrageous thing I personally saw at the starting point.

I was looking at the rankings here and suddenly discovered that this book, published in June, now has 2.4 Million words and is updated at 50,000 words a day. What the hell is that? Is this something a human can do?

Killing techniques are now the biggest failure. As a senior in high school, Sai will realize that he needs to learn more killing techniques, but he refuses to learn them. When he goes to college, he will need 50 contribution points for each one. It takes several months of hard work to learn one killing technique. A few killing techniques learned in high school is enough to earn contribution points after several years of hard work in college.

When I read Chapter 18, with the protagonist's performance, the head teacher even invested 500,000 yuan, but the school was left with nothing? In reality, which high school has students who can get into Tsinghua and Peking University without rewards?