There's Something Wrong with My Team Members

There is a heroine chasing me, let me take a look first 😍😍😍

Note, the following content may contain spoilers! Attention, the following content may contain spoilers! Attention, the following content may contain spoilers! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The protagonist's plug-in is an on-hook mini-game he played before, namely Line 0, but unlike other time-traveling games, the protagonist has only played a few previous chapters, and because it is an on-hook game, the protagonist doesn't pay much attention to the text, which makes the initial copy look a bit strange. Then the protagonist is not familiar with and... Trusts his own plug-in after traveling through time? The abilities currently displayed by the plug-in are ① prevent the protagonist from being eroded by other anomalies with assimilation abilities (I don't know the upper limit, but based on the introduction, it may be unlimited or can grow) ② Resurrection (suspected to have a price, but due to the special nature of the protagonist, he is exempted, and it is not sure whether others can use it) ③You can take the subway to get to the anomaly (the ticket is suspected to be of no cost to the protagonist) ④The Line 0 subway itself (but the cab is currently not open to the protagonist) The Line 0 subway is suspected of having the ability to assimilate other anomalies (the hospital adds a brief description) Currently, the protagonist feels a little confused, or is being pushed. Although it is a soul time travel (?), I have no memory, so I don't know many common sense issues. I think the author may want to incorporate the settings into the article to let the readers and the protagonist slowly uncover the secrets of the world. However, the problem is that sometimes there is too much science in the battles, and there is a little less science in ordinary daily life or less description. For example, the protagonist guesses that City Zero is also a large-scale anomaly, because he has never heard of other cities, and the people in the city are accustomed to it. (To be honest, the setting in the article feels a bit like a city based on the moon) Then I just asked other people a few times and then went straight to the mission. There was no other operation, such as checking the history of the city or other things. It's harmless, but it still feels a little strange. Then the current protagonist's combat power is not very strong. At first, it was described that being shot in the head by a pistol was no problem. Then when the wax figure was painted in the initial copy, it was described that it was only resistant to erosion, but it was only an ordinary person's physical fitness (maybe I was confused). Then later, when fighting a porcupine, it couldn't help much until it was swallowed. And there is currently no description of adding points or ability evolution, and the train does not give the protagonist tasks or character panels. It feels like a very open sandbox game. There is only so much I want to say at the moment. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is great! Come on!

The sense of déjà vu with the new moon, the amnesiac captain, the cute little girl, the taciturn big guy... The atmosphere is not good, and the dialogue is like reciting words.

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The beginning looks okay, but the development of the worldview such as visions later is very rough. It has a foggy and vague feeling. I know that the author wants to develop the story through the characters, but it is too rough, which makes the worldview even more blurry.

Children, I am Shen Nong, this book is not bad.

Because the protagonist has no fighting ability, except for the resurrection and the ability to quickly enter the dungeon brought by the train, there is no special attack method, so in every event, the protagonist basically relies on death. There is no fierce battle or other people. The protagonist seems to be fierce, but he only fires a few pistols, describes the violent fluctuations of emotions, and then analyzes the on-site battle situation, watching the teammates on top, using life and erosion resistance to resist the erosion, resurrecting to end the event, and then it is gone. Obviously other writings are so good, but it is a pity that the protagonist is fighting.

It's a pretty good idea, but its popularity is a bit low.

I read it all in one go, so far I have enough food, I hope there will be more updates

Dead eunuch, you will regret it after seeing it. This kind of author really is.

Children, I am Shen Nong, this book is not bad.

It's a bit interesting, and I feel good about it so far.

The first chapter of the opening chapter is amazingly written.

Not bad, give me a monthly pass to encourage me

I have been reading for a few days and the book is still good. But I personally feel that some places are not to my taste. The main problems are that it is slightly bland, the plot is not cruel enough, the protagonist's cheating is too strong, and it is not commensurate with the difficulty so far. The villain is a bit too superficial and not realistic enough. The sense of substitution is not strong.

I have read more than 60 chapters so far, which is okay, but the protagonist's frontal combat ability is too poor. Can it be strengthened?

The background feels a bit like a city (the Moon Project one)

Why did it suddenly get stuck? 😭 Don't cut it

Is it a single female protagonist, or a harem story?