I've Maxed Out Every God-Tier Talent!

The history of the struggles of indigenous people with mutated talents

It's good, but the protagonist is always chasing the dropped attributes, and some talents are not improved much. You can totally store it to feed future talents, which will make it more flexible.

It looks okay so far, but this setting has no future. Just hard work and talent can lead to the top. Where are those people with extraordinary talents? They don't think that only hard work will have a future. Where are those people who are obsessed with spears?

A small suggestion, if you practice advanced skills that are related to the skills you have already learned, you should gain some proficiency, right? For example, it would be easier to learn Pyroblast after learning Fireball. Otherwise, you would have to start all over again every time you make a big breakthrough. Wouldn't that be a disadvantage? You can add a setting later, "The composition of high-level skills includes lower-level skills. If the lower-level skills can be cultivated to a certain level, you can try to independently form high-level skills in the lower realm." I don't mean to teach the author to write a book, but if the cultivation of low-level skills does not help the high-level skills, then focusing on cultivating skills in the low realm is a complete waste of time in terms of cost-effectiveness.

Is the starting point now occupied by two-spined salamanders? A bunch of people from the extraordinary world are still making fun of ordinary people's training, such as the fifty laps and three hundred meters at the beginning. . It's only fifteen kilometers. It's a bit difficult in the real world, but in the real world you can do dozens of laps without being extraordinary. Your novel's record breaking of fifty laps is only fifteen kilometers, which is really funny. I used to be able to run thirty or forty laps of three hundred meters on a whim in high school. In reality, if you create a ranking list in high school and people are shocked, you can run fifteen kilometers casually. You don't even have a time limit.

The specific effect of the attributes dropped by the sky thief should be to increase the training effect by 10%. Just add it directly. You have to finish training and then go to the original training site to pick up the 10%. This system does not require you to go to jail for killing people.

It looks good and feels great. However, the author uses too many commas and breaks sentences very strangely in many places.

It's a purely enjoyable novel, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, it's mindless and refreshing, and it's pretty good. Hope it doesn't collapse later.

It's very smooth. I finished reading it in one go.

It's quite good and unique. Come on!