Master Zongwang, Parade of All Realms

I think the writers on Zhejiang really like to throw out a bunch of settings at the beginning, and then come up with a bunch of high-end stuff. So far, none of them are really good at writing. I really recommend writing in this genre to be more pragmatic and explore the adventure bit by bit, rather than just looking at the end at the beginning.

The main character's name feels like a little devil, I suggest you change it

Congratulations on adding another member to the Zongwang family. Now many new books are of such high quality! There is nothing wrong with this book except that it is a little small.

It's rare to find a good comprehensive online article, but when I found it, the book was almost out of date 😅

There is an unspeakable feeling of reading every book to death... It was originally a good read, the double comprehensive network was novel, and the fairy tale style was not bad. However, starting from the blunt time travel, everything changed, and the coherence of the story suddenly disappeared. After several days of reading, I finally can accept the world of Furui orcs, but what are you doing! ! ! Jumping back again? Going back and forth between the two worlds, you want to have sex and travel? (I didn't mean to say that the traveler is bad) The main reason is that your writing is very difficult. Pinocchio is about to show up, and I thought that a small climax is coming, but you suddenly go through Cunzhi, which is very uncomfortable. And the updates are not very stable now (understand, it is not full-time after all), but the plot advancement is too uncomfortable. If you don't update for a few days, you will really forget the previous content (I remember a little bit now), and I am not interested in reading new chapters. That is, I just click on the update when I see it, and then exit at the end... Sigh...

I'm afraid the author will have to send this update!

Your dungeons are written half-and-half. You just entered one dungeon and did not wait for two days before entering another dungeon. The other dungeons did not wait for two days before running back to the original dungeon. This is too messy, and the reading is extremely fragmented and incoherent.

Alas, it's a pity that it's private. The author's writing is really good, especially the part from Harry to the end of the first dungeon. It was too abrupt after transferring to the dungeon. It would have been better if I had kept writing Western Fantasy, but I guess it was just for fun. Originally, the new book list already ranked around 50, and there were no big-name books on the list at that time that could move up. As a result, I stopped updating for a day and lost all the recommendations. If I can't get into Sanjiang, I am at least in the top 5 in the division.

The name Chiye is still quite rare in the Internet literary circle.

Zongwang's new book, I'm looking forward to it first hand

It is obvious that you can write slowly and make it more life-like. The protagonist can be a scholar-type mage, learn alchemy from the Jade Record, embark on the path of a mage or an alchemist, travel to other worlds and learn alchemy. You are writing faster than me playing idle games and skipping battles.

What have you not written in the last dozen or so chapters? It's just a running account. Isn't it fun to write the beginning?

This book is threatening to explode. It's a torture to keep up with the updates. It's really fun to keep reading. But the problem is that I don't know what time it will be updated every day, and the more I write, the less it gets.

Recently, all the new books on the Internet are biased towards the noble Master, (although I also prefer the spell caster, after all, the description is more powerful)

I have been throwing out settings. However, two professions are given at the beginning. One profession is directly invisible in the early stage. You said that it would take hundreds of thousands of words to wait until the later stage. Not everyone has that long patience.

I think you should listen selectively, and make sure again and again that it's really not good before you change it, and don't let readers tell you what it is.

Let me be honest, what are you writing? Do these last twenty pictures have any plot?

It was so well written and I read it in one go. That's why I suddenly changed the style. Originally, the magic background was quite immersive, but suddenly I switched to the Foriga Wasteland.

There are really too many settings and too little plot. You can't even see the protagonist's efforts in cultivation and progress. It felt as bland as water, and I gave up the book 😅

This renewal is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. After all, there are too few integrated networks now. I'll wait until when I think of it.

The writing in the early stage was pretty good, but the hang-up was too big, and the force value expanded too fast, making it difficult to describe the subsequent plot. In fact, it could have been written more slowly. Written on the Internet, what kind of reinforcement can you get by writing copies and daily notebooks? You can also write about the effects of strengthening. Isn't it just a picture of the difference between after you become stronger and before you become stronger? You can expand and write. There is also the protagonist's enhancement. The description is too vague. You might as well change it to be more understandable. There is a lot to be written about how to understand and use these enhancements for the protagonist. The author probably has some writing skills. It's just too impatient. HP-based magic is rarely used in other worlds, but this magic system is relatively easy to understand. When combined with the DND system, wouldn't it be interesting? It's like the DND specialty system, which can be applied to Harry Potter. It can be logically self-consistent, just like the personal title in Harry Potter, Snape's Potion Master, which increases yield, increases output, and increases magic power. The White Devil Dumbledore, the White Devil adds non-evil spell casting speed, release range, spell strength, and spell priority. Is there any potion in Harry Potter that I can learn? On the Internet, if I play the game and play dungeons, will it only drop materials? It's not like the protagonist can't learn it. Aren't some potions particularly useful? Don't give up, author. Just treat this book as an essay. If you feel it's not good, I'll change it and write it again. The writing style is still there. Take your time and come on!