Star Immortal Clan: Start by Improving the Talents of Your Descendants

You... You didn't even have the desire to click on the homepage after seeing the introduction!

This is such a bad start. It's not gambling. How could it be possible to lose only 10 taels of silver? Borrowed from a loan shark? Compound interest? Even if the food is only 1/3 of its value, it is impossible to suffer such a loss.

I understand, this is about a courtyard house.

The beginning is okay, but then the writing is very messy, there is no foreshadowing at all, and the characterization is also very poor.

You can't read a little bit of the first chapter

You don't even have the interest to open the book in the comment section.

The introduction is inexplicable. What does temple blessing do? It has no introduction at all. The previous talent grading is also similar to the precedent of ancient Internet articles. It is best to write down the most attractive points of your book in the introduction, otherwise you will not have the desire to read it.

It's too trivial and the word count is a bit low. If I write more books, the plot will be better.

I've been reading it all the time. But recently I really don't want to watch it. 170 Pictures does not break through to the eighth level. Compared with other immortal cultivation novels, it is about the same and not too slow. But in other novels, I only take five or six pictures of the main character, and then I go quickly. It's not about suppressing the cultivation of the protagonist group, but bullying, humiliation from beginning to end, maybe a little bit, but overall it's downward pressure. The main purpose of reading novels should be to relieve stress. If you are not satisfied in reality, why would you feel uncomfortable reading a novel?