A Soul-Like Vampire in World War II

I've read up to chapter 33 so far, and it feels like the world-building and combat systems are starting to fall apart. I'm unsure how the world will develop from here. According to the current novel setting, the mystical can use magic to block bullets and bewitch ordinary people. In this scenario, nations would simply become puppets of the mystical.

Dear author, you might want to check out the world of "Trench Crusade." I feel that world-building fits your story better in some ways...

If the author is a newcomer, the writing style is decent and readable, but the plot development is a bit problematic; the pacing feels too deliberate. Has the author written any Japanese-style light novels before? The scenes involving the male and female protagonists have a certain charm, but they diluted the dark theme. All I can say is keep going!

There's a question: since they inherited the memories from the vampire's blood, why didn't they take the smoothbore musket that could fire at high speeds? Or is it already gone?

World War II + vampires, and you could even stitch a Castlevania into it.

It was hunger and fear (red k)

Has your protagonist never worked on any Souls-like games?

A newbie? This writing is really good. Sigh, I've been reading novels since third grade, and I've always dreamed of writing my own, but unfortunately, what I ever wrote was just garbage; I couldn't even pass my own test. I just don't have that talent.

The writing is decent, though a bit raw. The main storyline and world-building are still unclear; I'm really looking forward to it.

The setting and plot are quite interesting, but I hope the author can polish the character dialogues a bit more, as some of the word choices are a little awkward.