The Human-Skin Kite

The author's ID is the biggest terror

It's well written, and it's quite weird. It's just that the few police officers in the police force are a little too stupid. The police who have been on the front line for many years are more thoughtful than briquettes 😁

It is not a traditional supernatural article, but an article that explores strange laws and contains and controls the strange. At present, Seedlings has a smooth beginning. It does not directly point out the world's attitude towards the weird, but describes it from the perspective of an ordinary person who has just entered the supernatural field. I wrote something of my own, incorporating traditional supernatural elements. The beginning was interesting about "evil" and "old tradition". The description of the first Kite Ghost is very good, the atmosphere of terror is full, and the logic of this ghost's actions and the process of rule mining are full of details. I don't know the outline, but according to the plot, it is inferred that supernatural events will also occur in other areas. There should be more than one strange one. I wonder if the author has considered changing the name and introduction to make the contents of the book clearer to readers.

Dear author, hello. When reading this book, I felt that the title "Human Skin Kite" was somewhat inconsistent with the current content (so far, only the first incident appears). If there are no major echoes or foreshadowings later, or clues to the entire article, the title of this book may seem a bit inappropriate. It must be affirmed that this book has outstanding advantages in logic and plot rigor. I hope you will stick to it and do not be swayed by negative reviews. Although there are shadows of "Mysterious Resurrection", the plot is novel and full of heart, which satisfies readers. It's okay to learn from routines, but writing yourself is the key. The author also draws on folklore, which is a great innovation. I hope that I will be satisfied with it in the future! The most important thing is! ! ! Please update more often! ! ! Whisper: I'm worried that my words will put pressure on you and affect your state, but please stay confident and keep writing well!

A world where nothing can be accomplished without the protagonist.

Some characters are in conflict, so just describe them briefly once or twice. Don't just write a few sentences from time to time. Personally, I think it affects the perception very much and is very jarring! One of the major criticisms of Mysterious Resurrection is the description of the characters.

I only read the first few chapters. Every time the author creates a weird scope, you have to describe a certain female character. She is beautiful and has a good figure. Part of this rather dramatic description is really to promote the plot, such as the female corpse who got up by herself. But overall, those few words are quite abrupt, which is almost a devastating blow to the weird atmosphere you created. Especially when I often listen to books, it feels like I am watching a horror movie and suddenly cut to Peppa Pig.

This is the reincarnation of an old man, not a newbie at all

The weird writing is more interesting than the characters

It's really written with a sense of weirdness, and it's very beautiful. But it doesn't look good if you always let the policeman make a very abrupt face and cause conflicts. It is normal for the police to have bad guys, but your arrangement is too rigid. If you can change this person's performance, the whole story will be perfect and there will be no faults.