Traveling Through Song Qingshu, I Have a BOSS Template

You said you wrote well, so what kind of copy did you make? Also, drawing a circle with the left hand and a square with the right hand is a prerequisite for learning left-right interaction, not a method of cultivation. I can't stand it if you write quite well. Why do you write a copy?

It's poisonous, all kinds of data are written all over the place, and the plot is useless. Also, those people from the Ming Cult have started to kill your junior brothers and sisters, so you think they are your enemies. The protagonist is such a holy mother, and the writing style is average 😥😥😥

What the author wrote is really unpleasant. The first step was to say that people from Yitian World would not be invited, but the second step was to invite Zhou Zhiruo. If you invite Zhang Sanfeng and Song Yuanqiao, at least it makes sense. After all, one is the ceiling of the world and most worlds have left legends, and the other is the father of the protagonist's body. In the end, you invited Zhou Zhiruo. You said earlier that you shouldn't be a dog licker, and then you were the first to invite Zhou Zhiruo. Isn't this still a dog licker?

Strong! Stubborn! Extremely fierce! I write just because I feel that if you don't read back the discussion and comment, you will get back to me. You can make suggestions and ideas, but I won't change them and I'll give them back to you.

Just write it according to your current thoughts. This book is absolutely cool. The protagonist also said before that Wei Yixiao is the version that sucks human blood, so he wanted to kill him, but later he refused to kill him when he could. He said he wanted him to atone for his sins and to take care of the families of those he killed. 666 What about those who were wiped out or left alone? Kill if you kill, don't kill if you don't kill, I specifically emphasized that he is the blood-sucking version of Wei Yixiao, so I wanted to kill him, but now I let him go like a clown when I can. It's really a left-brain attack, and the right brain is responsible for thinking.

The data transformation is too complicated (physical strength, internal strength, etc.), And it is also suspected of suppressing the protagonist. In addition, the handling of Guangmingding is probably the biggest poisonous point at present. In addition, the author really relies on the system data to fill the plot.

What a loser. If you can't express this ancient feeling, write less. An awkward group. You can't turn a donkey into a dog.

First of all, the original novel Song Qingshu does not lick. His character was exposed when he escaped alone from Wan'an Temple and ignored Zhou Zhiruo. When Zhou Zhiruo fainted and fell to the ground after being rescued by Zhang Wuji, he ignored her. Although many TV series adapted from the novel added a dog-licking character to him, they beautified his character!

There are no benefits to opening a hook, let's use the side effects first!

I can't hold it any longer. The author needs to practice his writing a little more. This sentence is as fluent as a primary school student's composition.

Why do everyone who writes about Song Qingshu think he doesn't do anything? Can he firmly take over the position of leader? Damn it, Yu Lianzhou, Zhang Songxi and others have been eyeing the position of the head of Wudang. As soon as the Song family father and son make a mistake, they will immediately seize power. Ever since Song Qingshu was found out by Mo Shenggu that he may have slept with an Emei disciple, it is really a deadly move. How can there be any sympathy? Look at Li Yunlong, the guard who showed his sword, and was caught sleeping with a woman. What did Li Yunlong do? Go and apologize in person, and then ask a matchmaker to marry the woman to his guard. This is the attitude towards one's own people!

How many beds are there at the beginning? Later, I suddenly started to spend a lot of space describing the panels and panel explanations. The writing was also very poor. The character names made many mistakes and were not changed. Later, I made a copy of something and invited other people to type it.

Just like the original work, he is a licking dog.

Isn't Wudang's light kung fu Tiyunzong? Why did you take eight steps to catch the cicada? ? Has the author read it?

The protagonist of a book can be so kind that no one else understands him, or he can be so evil that everyone who reads it calls him a scumbag. But you can't be submissive and have no ideas of your own. Like a puppet on strings, it changes from moment to moment. Since it's about the universe, don't be afraid to change the plot. What everyone is watching is to change the plot. The plot is as easy to write as the original novel, but why should people read your novel? The original novel is not better than your writing style, and the TV series is not more graphic than your novel?

Qidian's editing standards are so changeable.

The creativity is okay and the writing is okay, but the plot and details are a mess,,,,,,,, The protagonist's golden finger needs are skills and reputation. If the skills are up to standard and the reputation is up to standard, you can upgrade, but the author's description is very confusing, or the reader seems to be struggling Then, in less than ten chapters, the protagonist is almost invincible, but the author can't write the feeling of martial arts at all, and the description of the fighting scenes is even worse,,,, or not close to it,,,,, To be honest, the author is not suitable for writing martial arts, and is more suitable for writing Western fantasy,,,,,,

The Swordsman Chapter is boring as hell. How did you think of switching from Zhongwu Yitian to Lowwu Xiaoao? It's really funny that you went there and studied Swordsman Martial Arts. The most important trivial plot was not changed. Why did you go there? Were your grades too good at first? ? ?

Wouldn't the author try using AI to write? Your writing is also very poor.

Brothers, we will have interactions with other worlds in the future. If you have a world you want to see or characters you want to add, you can leave a message below this post. The author will check it regularly, select the world from it, and write the characters later.

The third golden chapter is as bland as water, I don't know what to write? The main character of mother-in-law and mother-in-law plus the number of water characters…….

I originally thought that the boss template was a template for you to create some awesome characters, such as bosses like Xiong Ba and Emperor Shitian, but it turned out to be just a numerical panel, a boring idea.

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