At the Same Time, I Travel Through Time and Develop My Own Golden Fingers

If you are not specifically writing about Douluo fans, I suggest you not touch Douluo. This is basically considered politically correct in online writing.

Let's change the first chapter so that the protagonist just wakes up and has no time to run away, otherwise the protagonist will look dull. After all, it's been several years since time travel. The timeline of the Yuan Dynasty cannot be wrong. The six sects should know about it. Zhang Sanfeng should have heard of it. There is martial arts. Xian Yutong is your uncle or senior uncle for a few years. You should know people. Knowing so much information, the protagonist has to wait for the master to know that the story of Heaven and Dragon Slaying is really difficult. Moreover, the protagonist did not run after knowing it and determined to take revenge. Is this the result of revenge? How many arrows are stuck in the back to escape? Even if you go down the mountain and find a few craftsmen to help you rub a few firearms and lift the table, you won't be able to defeat a native. I really listen to the readers' advice and change it before it is put on the shelves.

The rest of the writing is good, but when it comes to the original characters, it can't cover up the protagonist's obscene aura, who likes to preach, spreads martial arts indiscriminately, and preys on young girls. It's really a pity that the villain's success is played to the point of perfection.

It feels very messy, and I always feel that there is something wrong, that is, there are no details at all, and many things are omitted. It seems that there is nothing to look at, and there is no desire to read carefully.

Why write Douluo? Md got angry when he saw Douluo and left

Douluo's writing looks down on me personally.

Are the recent updates too watery? And the author occasionally adds a little poison

Now in Douluo Continent, all you can do is follow the martial arts.

Nian ability can be completely developed into abilities such as "God rewards hard work", "Proficiency" and "Earth's grace". These abilities are all cumulative and do not require additional energy! "Tiandao rewards those who work hard" means that every effort is rewarded, that is, piece rate pay. "Proficiency" is a permanent certificate, just like game saves. "Earth's Favor" is to increase potential, similar to the evolution of a snake into a dragon, and the evolution of a low-level bloodline into a high-level bloodline!

The first world is okay, but the second world starts with a lot of conjectures, the transformation of abilities in different worlds, cards, etc., Etc., And the plot progress does not even account for half of the chapter. What we are reading is a novel, not a paper, don't go into all your so-called Cards, all kinds of messy things, write more plots. After Douluo meets Master Tang San, what theory are you talking about for a long time? You are already level 99, and your goal is the god position. What are you talking about with a bunch of little people in their 20s and 30s? Inexplicably, I lost several chapters.

It's okay without Douluo, but it feels like it's unwatchable if it's added.

Later, when I was writing about the pirate, I couldn't figure out why there was so much water. I was told whether to accept it or not. I thought there was some explanation. I didn't even know what the plot was about in most of the pages. I even copied the original plot and didn't know what to do.

I think it is enough to share the memory of 99 genres, stack talents, and stack mental power (soul power). These basic things can be left to your own devices. The kind of shared strength, the power system is too easy to jump. After basically writing two or three worlds, it is found that it is basically invincible. What to do in other worlds? So even if you only share the basic talent categories and write 99 worlds, you can still open a new book and start over, and it will become a genius novel.

I don't bother to read any books about Douluo

Writing a novel about the same world is so long and so damn stupid, you will have to rush to the street sooner or later

Please stop talking nonsense and go practice or get the grass jelly or get the Blue Silver Emperor after you finish fighting.

It's imaginative, but the writing is really hard to read.

Goldfinger was completely created by me. There were too many logical loopholes and it was quickly formed. I didn't even understand how it was done. The upgrade process was skipped. The character of the protagonist was also too small, which made it feel very low.

What is the plot of Douluo written about?

The writing style, logic and story are all very good, but there are too many analytical articles. The novel itself is nonsense, and it would be meaningless to analyze nonsense within the nonsense. There are also some female characters. In order to reasonably change the settings, each of them has to be analyzed reasonably for more than half of the chapter. The analysis article is already seriously larger than the content of the story.

The imaginative book was wiped out

I stopped reading this book after One Piece👀👀👀👀

The next two hundred or so chapters will become a Pirates fandom.

The writing was good, but the plot progressed a little slowly. . . Just skip two or three pictures like Sea of ​​Death and Fire. One or two more pictures will feel like cheating on royalties. A good novel is completely written to death. . But the idea is really good. . Are there any books that have been reopened? Or the same type of introductory introduction? ?

Are there any novels with a mysterious journey into the world? ?

It's better to conquer one world and then conquer the next world.

First of all, the name of the protagonist is very dramatic and has no sense of substitution.

It's so bad, I can't watch Pirates anymore

Even the golden fingers worn by all the gods can't cover up the protagonist's wretched spirit of being a villain and a pure rooster and a dog thief.