No Light Tomorrow

Brother, the writing is good. You can also take a look at mine and give me some suggestions. I wish you will sign the contract as soon as possible.

Fans of director Nolan are ecstatic.

Coming from a writer's assistant, I feel like I can't classify it in an online article. It seems that the reader needs to click on the words little by little,

Is this the image, the artistic conception?

Followed, the writer's assistant scanned the code, please reply politely?

Well written, suspenseful and sci-fi, which I like! Wish you success! Recommended by the author of "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Come on together! @Mysterious Rice Bowl.

I'm from a writer's assistant. Um, if I tell you my true feelings, you might be upset, so I'll just put my finger on it first. I often look at those edited slices. In the words of the editor, there is dyslexia starting from the first paragraph. People can't understand and don't know what story you are telling. The masked man, the woman, and who said the big paragraph in front of it all seem to be in the clouds and are being made up of mysteries. The upper limit is too high.

I am also here as an assistant. At the beginning of the first chapter of Matte Tomorrow, I felt that the sentences were a little unclear and a little bit foggy. If the first chapter wasn't so mysterious, maybe more people would like it.

Your overall story is good to watch, but fans must be very patient to continue reading, because there are a lot of foreshadowings. It is recommended that you take it step by step slowly, otherwise it will be like one thing has not been dismantled yet another thing needs to be dismantled, and it feels like the answer to the puzzle will never be dismantled. Sorry, I am a bit direct in my words.

Let me first state that I have not read the content of the novel, only the introduction. Everything that follows is also based on the introduction. If you think it is wrong, you are right. The introduction has too many elements and is too complex. I think a good work must first have a clear context, showing the complicated main line in a clear and simple way. I can't extract an obvious main line from the introduction. The so-called exploration of the origin of the self is too false and empty, and the same is true for the confrontation between the positive and the negative world, or the existence, etc., Which are not very directional. The only thing that is certain is that this is a suspense novel, and it may also have some philosophical thinking, which greatly reduces the audience target of your book.

It feels like the entire paragraph is full of long sentences. This is fine when written in a book, but too uncomfortable to read on a mobile phone. The second thing is that this novel is very easy to dissuade readers like me. I can't understand what it says at the beginning, so I have to endure it and read on, which is a bit time-consuming. This is how I felt after reading the first chapter. Although, I still want to wish you success at the end and vote for you!