American Variety: Sniper Elite

There is nothing to say about the author's writing style, which can be said to be very good, but the excessive pile of words made it impossible for me to produce corresponding pictures in my mind when I read it. Many times the words do not convey the meaning, so it is better to omit the places that should be omitted The protagonist's motivation is also very confusing. You can say that the killer industry is dangerous and lonely, but it should not be as inexplicable as the protagonist If there is a problem, the order will not be accepted directly. When the employer has problems, why is it not solved by an intermediary? Why don't you ask clearly if you have to solve it yourself?

Have you ever been a killer? Just write it randomly and take it for granted 😜

After reading Chapter 58, it's weird. I'm a native but I have an inexplicable sense of superiority. I'm stuck but I can't activate Wushuang. I can't do it if I'm neither good nor bad.

You can try to learn the sniping technique like Willis, and you won't be a human being at all.

This plug-in is a fire-power holy body. The grenade, mortar, and grenade sniper are all better than the chain sniper.

Have you finished the book after just seeing it on Chiji?

I haven't started watching it yet, but I just read the introduction and character information. Let me first guess, is this book inspired by The Day of the Jackal? The final payment, hahahahaha.

Fairy grass, but in order to avoid the police finding the bullet stained with his own blood, a killer ran into a bunch of police and agents and came back alive. A bit too far-fetched

It is said that killers are at the bottom of the dark world, equivalent to cattle and horse workers in factories, and they are not as profitable as black agents, black lawyers, black doctors, etc.

To be honest, I rarely write reviews, but I have read a lot of books. Just because I have more than 20 monthly passes (purely for reading), I can guarantee that this book is definitely good to read, especially the second chapter after it was put on the shelves. It really surprised me Authors who write about American dramas with a lot of Chinese flavor and a lot of Maja Fake are 10,000 times better. Really, this book is good-looking because it doesn't have any Chinese flavor, that's all. Moreover, it also innovates the worldview of American dramas, especially from the perspective of wits It is especially rare.

It really doesn't work out later, and the character creation of the protagonist is not even as good as that of the policewoman, nor is the precise killing process at the beginning. If he is completely exposed, can he still be considered a killer? If you are completely clear, you will have to write about politics, but can you write well?

I felt that the plot after the protagonist became the successor of the family was quite boring. I skipped reading it all. Didn't we read this book just because the protagonist would fight with wits and courage as a killer to kill everyone? If you want to see the family's power management, wouldn't it be a good idea to look for this subject?

Too many people know the protagonist's true identity, including his real name and appearance. Such a killer is very unprofessional.

The only bad thing about a good book is that I discovered it too early 😫

There are too many detailed descriptions, and the amount of updates cannot match this level of detail, so that it feels like the plot is advancing very slowly, making people unable to help but read the book instead of chasing updates every day. If this continues, will the 24-hour reading rate really not be a hit? 🙂

It feels a bit weird, there is no plot, it just keeps throwing out characters, and each character without plot support consumes the reader's patience.

I've already played Sniper Elite, why don't I explode two of them🥚🤓

This was the inspiration from that TV series. The killer also wants to collect the debt. The coolest thing is the sniper rifle that uses a planetary camera as an auxiliary frame

The author's writing style is very good, but I want to express my personal opinion. I hope the author can also see that a story needs a main line and a hidden line. Your story has no clear main line and no clear hidden line, so it seems very trivial. Secondly, a story requires the protagonist to have a clear character. You are a time traveler, and you also have a plug-in. What kind of character should your protagonist be? You are the protagonist. You become a killer but you don't know why you don't want money. You don't have too many descriptions here. You don't seek perfection. You don't build a huge empire through your own means, nor do you do it for beauty. You don't have a group of wives and concubines, and you have no ideals and beliefs. You don't mean to practice your own path. Of course, you don't have hobbies. I don't see the kind of joy you get when killing people. So it's strange, why do you want to embark on the path of a killer? You are not forced by life, which is why you seem to have written a lot, but the protagonist has no relevant character traits, he has no specific core, and no specific relevant power of action. He just keeps accepting commissions and then killing people. But he never kills for fun, nor does he do it for money. He has already become a rich man. The whole story is messy and there is no complete plot line. The background story is not very clear. You just said that it is a world of killers and high-speed pursuits. You want to follow the plot of high-speed pursuits, but you can't come up with anything new. So I hope the author can think carefully. You must at least give a protagonist an obvious character trait, and intensify it through constant shaping of conflicts to generate plot trends, instead of constantly filling in characters.

The hook on the lock is very strange. It only has the function of locking people and has no extra functions. The whole story can run normally without any interruptions. There is no main plot Come back half a month later, a month later, and two months later to see if this post has been deleted and whether the author has banned comments

I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I feel like I'm high-end, but in the end, I'm flawless. I'm afraid I won't be able to find him.

It seems that there are several problems 1. There is a heroine at the beginning without any foreshadowing, and the relationship progresses too quickly. 2. Don't use AI pictures to represent the characters of the original drama. If it doesn't work, just leave it there 3. Make some high table backgrounds. It's not necessary to see the killer, not the family dispute. I'm not saying these to attack you or anything. If you can see it, think about it. If you can't, block it.

American TV series, "The Killer" I inherited the family's assassination outsourcing and open DO every day

Can we have a bigger layout like next door? Instead of just going it alone, we can develop a seat and slowly erode the high table.

Come on 🙂 Write well, it's very good

In the recent plot, you will fight and kill for a while and then start doing. After a while, you will continue to do. What about the plot?

This setting is the story of the jackal?

In the first few chapters, he was still a ruthless character who didn't talk much. But when Leon started to play the main character, his style changed. Speaking of which, a protagonist with a game system doesn't actually travel through time?

If you have any questions, send them here and the author will check them carefully.