Crime Car

It can be seen that the background story should be quite complete, and the characters are also very distinct. The uncle who is able to hide his secrets, the reckless antisocial child, the mysterious woman and the unlucky police officer are a very interesting group of protagonists. But it feels like the information is a bit dense. Within three chapters, the secret behind the character's story is clearly hinted at. Moreover, the identity and background of the characters are mostly conveyed through dialogue, which makes the plot feel messy and makes the characters a bit stiff. Then I think Lin Zichen should be a character worth talking about and slowly exploring, giving readers a process of understanding from shallow to deep. In these three chapters, the highlight of the story has been focused on Lin Zichen from the beginning, which seems a bit deliberate and gives people the feeling that Lin Zichen is pretending. As for the description, it would be nice if the description of the character's expressions and movements could be more detailed. Some places, such as the smile of the mysterious woman and the place where lzc rescues the mysterious woman, have a bit of a blank feeling. From the plot point of view, the woman is standing very dignified overall, but when she was held hostage, she was pinched by the neck and moved forward, and then when she was rescued by lzc, there seems to be no explanation of the mysterious woman's movement changes. Although this is not the focus of the description, if it is not said at all, it seems that the game fault modeling has been translated, which leaves a bit of blank space in the play. If you start from a certain part or a certain micro-movement, you may generate many new ideas, making the entire narrative more interesting. But the overall narrative is quite smooth, come on.