I Have Been Refining Gu for Ten Years in Nanyang, and All Living Beings Respect Me as a God.

Do you know what the author's biggest failure is? Let me tell you: Because of the fault tolerance, every time he dies deliberately or forcibly, the immortality does not reflect the aspect that the protagonist can reincarnate. It is just two characters. It is far-fetched. As the protagonist, he has been through the danger of death many times. Hasn't the protagonist grown in all aspects? Some small things have to be killed several times. There is no logic at all.

The writing is poor and cannot support the plot setting. The plot setting is good, but the writing is poor. And I can't write that kind of scary atmosphere.

Is there any diligent updating Gu and constant updating Gu arranged for Jianjue?

Author, look at what you wrote. Doesn't it look awkward? I write one idea back and forth, but my words go around in circles😥

The new vest of Dujue on the sword. I personally like the Evil God, but it's a pity that the author ran away. 🦔Mao has written several novels, which are all readable, but they are all unfinished. I hope this one can be completed. The homogenization of novels is too serious now, and it is rare to have a novel that can be read.

The protagonist participating in a battle of wits. Jpg

I don't understand why there are so many trolls in the comment area. To be honest, the writing is okay.

No more to say, just see for yourself

It feels like the protagonist is written as an idiot who cannot grow or learn lessons. I have experienced many things and died several times, but the result is still so reckless and unable to control myself.

A common problem with this kind of books is that after the pig's feet have a little ability, all kinds of extraordinary things will appear in the world? Doesn't this feel like the world structure is fragmented?

The author is Sword Shangdujue, the black-winged demon? Isn't Kai Wushuang written in the supernatural drama?

Is it possible to write about this subject now? Won't your account be banned?

After reading dozens of chapters, I have the following main problems. The first one is that the protagonist seems to have no brains. He just has to fight with his life to complete the task. After death, he does not make preparations and will be reincarnated immediately. The second is that the advancement of extraordinary power is too slow. After completing a task, I have no ability to protect myself at all. I am still killed instantly when I enter the next task. So what is the meaning of completing the task? Just like when you play a game, after completing the mission, you will upgrade and add attributes and learn skills, but it will not be reflected on the protagonist at all, which makes it boring to watch.

A newcomer writes a book, with a meaningless plot and a dull protagonist. The subject matter is very good, but the author's ability to design plots is insufficient and it is easy to persuade him to quit.

That tiger-and-crane double-shaped Tai Chi picture is not very coordinated when thrown around. What you wrote is a mysterious test, not a fairy tale. Every time I look at that picture, I am very amused. Wouldn't it be nice to directly practice tiger boxing, strengthen the seven-level body, and control stronger ghosts?

Talking and writing about reincarnation Gu is like a system, but there is no sense of immersion.

Author, where is your Gu? There are all kinds of ghosts, and I didn't see the protagonist using Gu.

No wonder the author's grades are not good. If you look carefully at each copy of your design, you will find something written in it. It's incomprehensible and inexplicable. You don't have the ability to make original copies. You can just copy a few from other people's novels. The more you write, the more rubbish you write. You also write the same copy over and over again.

The so-called Gu Dao in Southeast Asia feels very unappealing 😅. I originally thought the protagonist was using Fang Yuan's template.

Why should new forces cooperate and cultivate their own people?

Don't cut it off, your character is almost gone with me. In the past few years, the only book I've been pursuing is "Tokyo Sword Master". You've been a eunuch for the others. It's rare that this book has been written for so long. I've given you a lot of monthly votes, okay?

I wrote more than 400 chapters. It's such a pity to cut them off like this.

Don't be a eunuch, I love this book so much

He pretended to be dead for a few times and then lay back down, speechless.

Is this a vest for nine days of meditation?

Adding a new ceiling is too stiff and makes people uncomfortable.

It's a pity that the author obviously ran out of ideas later on and used a lot of AI to expand the draft.

Write well. Can you at least finish it?

Please update the cat book Tokyo Supernatural

I knew I couldn't continue writing it since I started writing the tiger and crane double-shaped Tai Chi diagram. The audience for this book is supernatural folklore, weird and terrifying, so I wrote a Tai Chi diagram and threw it here and there. The audience for this book is immortals and heroes. You have made your own way. Those who like immortals and heroes will not click on this book. Those who like the supernatural and mysterious should give up after reading this.