Rebel's Game

Chapter 1 is over 4,000 words? After reading it, I was in a state of confusion. There were too many repetitive words. The main plot should be the few sentences recorded in the notebook at the end. The sense of suspense and horror made you feel long-winded. One sentence was modified repeatedly, and overall it was okay. If you reduce the 4,000 words to about 2,000, you should be able to sign it.

You think quickly, have a correct learning attitude, actively participate in class interactions, and complete assignments with high quality. Treat people with sincerity and kindness, and actively participate in class activities. I hope to continue to maintain this and pursue greater progress.