
Swallowed Star: The Cultivation Progress Bar
吞噬星空之修炼进度条
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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567Chapters
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Do you know why the author started writing from the earth at the same time as Luo Feng? Because it's a no-brainer. Basically, those who write fan fiction change the positions of the protagonist and Luo Feng. Then change the golden fingers again. Earth starts. Then cultivate into a god of war and go to the training camp. Betting begins. Then leave within a month or two. Then go get the Black Dragon Mountain spaceship. Start with a wave of Bota. Then go to the universe to buy a few slaves, and then return to Earth to show off. The battle of geniuses begins later. Get first place, then go to the initial universe and start showing off. Break through the sky bridge. Then in the ending, the protagonist goes through a few more levels. A passerby marvels at how talented the protagonist is. Then go to the primitive secret realm for two rounds. Then follow in the footsteps of the original Luo Feng. Go to the world of hemoptysis first. Visit some secret places. The protagonist can't die anyway. Then break through to a domain master. Then become an inspector. Then other peak tribes are assassinating. Then the protagonist mixes it up again. Then return to the original secret realm to break through the world master. Then if the protagonist loses and worships the teacher, he will give several treasures. Then the protagonist goes to the outer battlefield to kill. Probably this book is written by Qian Wuzun. Then there is basically nothing to see behind. There's basically nothing after the protagonist breaks through immortality. Can look good. What Tongren writes now is pretty much the same.
It's great. One billion people died for Luo Feng's glory, and more than half of the God of War died. If Luo Feng knew that you knew there would be such consequences, but you still did this for his glory, you would be a loser
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The author just added his own personal touch to the original work, without much of his own touch. Is the threshold for being a writer so low now?
I have read almost fifty chapters, and I feel that the main character can't even keep up with the heat. The reason is that the main character is always a step behind. Once is excusable, twice is no longer enough, and three times is unbearable. Moreover, the main character's gratitude can sit at the same table as three. Lei Shen and Hong are still in coma and they don't save them. This is because they have forgotten how the early resources came from. In short, if you want to watch it, you can watch 43-47 first, and then decide whether to continue to spend money to watch it.
What is the significance of what the protagonist wears?
10 Starry Sky fanfics and 9 Earth fanfics all start with the same routine. What's so interesting about it? Isn't it okay to start with the previous universe? They all start on Earth, and the routines are all the same.
There are several major poisonous points in Swallowing the Starry Sky. In order to highlight the protagonist he wrote, the author wrote about Luo Feng's three wrong views, and then criticized them. Has this author really read the original work? The three views of Luo Feng's original work cannot be correct, and then he took away all Luo Feng's opportunities and relied on Luo Feng's opportunities to make his fortune. Without Luo Feng's opportunities, it would be nothing. In this case, I might as well read the original work. Such an author cannot write his own things. He only relies on copying the original work and following Luo Feng's path. The protagonist has no own path.
The author's writing is too outrageous, with too many flaws and too many bugs. He treats other readers' comments as enemies and complains. Only when he made a mistake in writing and couldn't cover it up did he change it and say thank you. The plot is also dependent on it, and there is nothing attractive about it.
Does this have the potential of the "real dragon" in the Dilong comment section?
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Another normal person traveled through time and lived an ascetic life without even having a normal life, so no more wasting money!