Mortals: Tiannan Invades Chaotic Star Sea

If you don't like licking, which immortal cultivator can't make elixirs? I have a photographic memory at the fourth level of Qi Refining, how could I not be proficient in it? Do you think Han Li is a master of alchemy? He also practiced elixirs one by one, practice makes perfect

The introduction is to persuade people to quit. Nowadays, who still watches nanny-lao-slave style? It was all popular in the past. Things like Han Li's are all selfish. If you fool him, he might sneak attack on the protagonist. In the original work, Han Li is very fond of Zi Ling who can charge into battle. If you ask him to give resources to Zi Ling, see if he will give it to you. What can your protagonist do to compare with his goddess? You might as well not bother him and let him continue to develop honestly. As long as there is nothing wrong with the sect, he will definitely stay in the sect and there is no need to add drama. Goldfinger is also very laborious. You can't use normal spirit stones or the like. Does it have to be new and different? It is not easy for you, a new author, to write a normal book honestly. It is difficult to write a plot that is unconventional, and readers will not have the confidence to read it.

The author just tried to persuade him to quit, and he didn't understand the story of mortals cultivating immortality at all. What he wrote was similar to that of an old slave. He could take whatever he wanted, and Han Li would have no problem with it. The world of mortal cultivators is at a low level in the world of cultivation. The so-called immortal cultivators are not very high. It is impossible to close the timeline and so on. Moreover, the Tao masters will be swallowed up. Those with higher cultivation levels will only be a little longer. In the future, Han Li will be just a Da Luo. Tao ancestors are not completely incapable of ability, and the original Han Li is even less likely. If the bottle slips away, he will not be able to travel through time and space. You need to be more relaxed when writing novels. If you write about this and that, it's the same as Lao Nuliu. Then no one will read your book, and you won't come up with any new ideas. You won't be creative.

It's a really bad excuse to force him to touch the old devil because he doesn't know how to make alchemy. This is a mortal, not a fight.

What annoys the most is this type of fandom licking the protagonist. Han Li is not an alchemy genius. He doesn't know how to practice it. Han Li's talent is very good. Besides, the pills that Han Li practiced when he first got the little green bottle in the early stage can be practiced by a normal immortal cultivator. It's as if he was a single party in ancient times.

It's simply ridiculous. With Han Li's rubbish qualifications, you can find any alchemy skill and you can practice it faster or better than him. Han Li's alchemy relies entirely on unlimited materials to gain proficiency. Once he encounters something with limited materials, such as Pei Ying Dan, he immediately stops cooking. Having the time for Han Li to brush up on his proficiency, any alchemist he could find would have already made a hundred and eighty furnaces. At worst, he would kill the alchemist after making the elixir, so he wouldn't be afraid of leaking the news about the elixir.

The plot of this book is okay, except for the fact that Ryo licks the old slave at the beginning, and licks Han, causing the reader to run out of time. This is not the case for harem-style novels. Just look at the voting and you will know that the reader base is good, but it is a pity that the author cannot get it. Now everyone knows that Han Li is selfish, and even if he licks Han, he will not get resources. The author can sum up his experience and open a small account to open a new book and see if he can have perfect attendance.

This book has many female titles, and I have read dozens of pages of content. The way it is written is the standard writing method for eunuch cultivation. In essence, it is still eunuch cultivation. There is little interaction and no description of dual cultivation. There will definitely be no one charging for it to be put on the shelves. If you want harem readers, you have to focus on interacting with beauties and describing dual cultivation. You already have a golden finger. Who is going to read the secret realm of training and fighting? The harder the protagonist works, the more inconsistent and boring it becomes. Moreover, it is the same old map and the same routine. After watching the fandom for several years, not many people are interested anymore.

Tiannan invades Chaotic Star Sea, seek death, the Twin Saints of Heavenly Stars and the Old Demon of Six Paths don't mind killing them all first

After reading the second chapter, I didn't bother to read it. Or I didn't go in the first place, and I didn't take it after I went there. What about my future body? I even helped you make elixirs. Do you dare to eat them after you make them?

Nangong Wan

The most beautiful woman in Yellow Maple Valley

The Demon Dao can overthrow Chaos Xinghai in the past. Dozens of Nascent Soul Hehuan lead the team, one late Nascent Soul and a bunch of mid-term early stages. As long as a large number of casual cultivators in Chaos Xinghai will definitely join in the past, your six paths are nothing. Hehuan has one late Nascent Soul plus a pair of mid-term Hehuan. There are Taoist companions who can fight against the Empress Yuan and a pair of zombies who can fight against the Empress Yuan. How do you let Liu Dao fight? As soon as He Huan's army appears on the Holy Demon Island, the birds and beasts will disperse. If you join the He Huan army, at least you will not be refined, and you can go to Tiannan to find opportunities. Who will go to hang out with Liu Dao. Tiannan is not comparable to Luan Xinghai in terms of skills, secrets, weapons, talismans, and elixirs. Luanxinghai has only been developed for tens of thousands of years. Tiannan has a bunch of sects with a history much longer than that. As long as they can communicate with each other, they will definitely join Tiannan in large numbers, especially Nascent Soul monks.

Chapter 1 What's going on with the Sky Vase? Will he still run away and attack on his own? I hope the author can give an explanation and "someone is stopping him somehow". It's really poisonous.

It's really a pity that this book has such a good score. The protagonist's behavior of licking Korea in the early stage lost a lot of readers, but now it is not a problem at all, and it has not caught up with the good times. Now I am not afraid that you will lick me, I am afraid that you will not lick me enough.

The protagonist was banned by Xia Xing Gong. Why don't you run back to Tiannan and find a way to lift the ban yourself. Or ask for help from the sect. After all, it was Old Monster Qiong, the true successor of Nascent Soul. He was just like a casual cultivator. The protagonist is a direct descendant of the sect. In fact, after forming the pill, you can get Nangong Wan to tell the sect about the teleportation array. Because the protagonist and Nangong Wan's master are both sect talkers. Why are you acting like a model worker who was abandoned by Huang Maple Valley? And you have nothing to lose. There is no need to dig into your own pocket to subsidize the sect. After forming the elixir yourself, just go to Biling Island to practice. There is a top-quality spiritual vein inside. There must be multiple spiritual eye objects. The protagonist only needs to set up the spirit gathering array. Then hold the high-grade spiritual stone and practice at the node where the top-grade spiritual stone is produced. No worse than taking drugs. Fake babies can be achieved within a hundred years. Then go to Guiwu to make a fortune. Make good use of the prophet's plot development. Only 🧠🔨

The protagonist is probably an ancient man. It doesn't look like someone who traveled through time in the modern era. It seems that he is just in elementary school. I don't even know how to use scientific thinking.

Summary of Poisonous Points in Internet Articles 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being chased by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and act in a low-key manner instead of continuing to take high-profile murderous risks. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to avoid being approached by enemies or even harming relatives and friends should be the basic IQ of the protagonist. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not ridicule others in person for no reason, including the protagonist. It should be the basic IQ of the villains, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. If you work for others, including women, you should negotiate the remuneration in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words there are, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires a sufficient reason. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist needing to save lives frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.

I'm really speechless now. I've been stuck writing a little plot, and I have to revise the text... Can I still happily write a book? 😡😡😡

First of all, I would like to thank all the fellow Taoists who have continued to read, given monthly tickets, and recommended tickets. I was very happy when I saw the short post about testing the water last night. This post is to ask all book friends to give you some advice. You can mention the poisonous points of this book, as well as your opinions or ideas. Please speak freely. After all, writing a book is a long-term process, and the author alone will definitely have many flaws, so I would like to brainstorm ideas and ask for help from all the smart Taoist friends. Wish you all a happy weekend! Send me a wife to give everyone a hug~

If you have a mustache. Extremely yin. Catch it and collect it from Yunlu. Plus good fortune elixir. Everyone is talking about whether Yunlu can break through the Yuan Dynasty 😏

Chapter 2 Poison Hair, the same character protagonist as Tang San

Another one who knows he is the protagonist, has God's help, and is desperately trying to die.

"Mortal Plum Ningxiu Immortal Biography"

Can you fake the corpse? . . .

There is no shortage of struggle in cultivating immortals, okay~_~ A foundation builder is stirring up trouble.

Updates have been suspended for three months, and Qidian's popular series is still recommended.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long