With the Sky

I looked around, wondering where Shennong was? Where is Shennong!

It's better to state the theme directly at the beginning. Don't be pretentious and confused.

Now I know why no one has read your book. You are not a master yet but you use the writing method of a master. I've already read Chapter 7, but I don't even see what you're writing about. Maybe it'll be interesting later on, but I don't want to read it at this moment.

If you are not a great writer, the short title is actually quite unkind to the author. Today's short book titles are basically exclusive to great writers.

In fact, the author's writing is pretty good, but the entry and exit of the female characters are a bit confusing, and the background and settings are not explained clearly. Finally, it would be better if each chapter could be titled. How about continuing to look at it later, after all, there are only 33 pictures now

I read Chapters 7 and 8, and I was confused.

Why is the author not on the shelves? We can support him.

Excellent products, don't worry about pursuing them! The author must be steady

I haven't read this article since I read Sword Type. It's really good.

If the author doubles the chapter name, the score will at least double.

It's good, but netizens like to just slap their faces on it. Let's see if I can write it down.

The title and introduction of the book seem pretty good, so I added a bookshelf.

Add a name to the chapter. A very traditional novel, the writing style is very good among online novels. Good luck to the author.

The author's writing style is very good, and he has the qualifications to become a god. However, I feel that the setting is similar to that of classical heroes. It is a bit less rigorous. It cannot be written for a long time solely relying on inspiration. I am afraid that the combat power will be lost after writing. Maybe I can learn from the Fairy Gourd or Dao Zhengfei to improve the setting system.

There are no subtitles in the first thirty chapters. Damn 😄, I read one chapter and the writing is quite smooth. I don't know what the plot is like.

I am not a platinum master, but I wrote it concisely and clearly in the early stage, and grasped the three gold cards. It's okay to write like this once you've gained a certain level of popularity after platinum.

It's very well written, keep it up! 😁

It's well written. It's best to write down the names of the previous chapters. It is recommended that the protagonist jump over levels and fight monsters not to be too wide. If there is a female protagonist, it must be Yu Jie 😍

Why haven't I published it after writing so much?

Card! Support support support

This book has the status of platinum, tsk tsk tsk

I hope you stick with it, it will be popular if it is put on the shelves

You must write it down and don't enter the palace.