Douluo: My Martial Spirit Comes with Thunder Tribulation

The latest chapter is 25. The protagonist is full of innate soul power and doesn't have a soul ring yet.

The protagonist has a super martial spirit, a body forged with thunder and lightning since childhood, and a top-notch soul ring. It is very difficult to fight in a small place like Soto City with junk martial arts and soul rings. When I went to Wuhun City, I was already level 30, which was higher than the future Gangzi. As a close combat soul master, I was almost squeezed and collapsed by Yu Xiaogang. You are equivalent to a thin man knocking down a cow while it is eating grass. Do you think it is possible? How can the author's protagonist look down on Yu Xiaogang?

Author, I really don't understand what you wrote about cultivation resources. What cultivation resources does a junior college have? Tell me the resources that a soul master around level 10 can use. The entire Douluo 1 includes soul rings and soul bones, as well as medicinal baths. Medicinal baths are also monopolized by big families. It would be a bit of a show if you wrote it for a junior college, and you can still earn more resources. Douluo 1 Before Tang San was born, everyone from level 99 to level 1 relied on meditation to improve their levels. Are there any resources to speed up cultivation? Mimetic environment training is only available in Tiandou Royal Academy, and it is for senior students. It's just that after Tang San was born, there was an extra fairy grass, so what cultivation resources did a group of primary school students need to fight for? Also get a ranking.

Qian Renxue is the offspring of the union of Qian Xunji, an angel spirit master, and Bibi Dong, an evil spider spirit master. Qian Daoliu's talent can only open the eighth angel test, while Qian Renxue's talent surpasses Qian Daoliu and directly takes the ninth test. Angel martial soul has a characteristic: it kills evil and nourishes itself. It is estimated that before Qian Renxue awakened her martial soul, Angel, a god-given martial soul, relied on her superior quality and special attack on evil to kill two top evil spider martial souls. She succeeded in eating chicken, feeding herself, and strengthening Qian Renxue's talent. Qianxunji is an angel martial soul master, but he accepted Bibi Dong, an evil martial soul master, as his apprentice. It cannot be ruled out that it is to prepare for the continuation of future generations. The angel martial soul is a single lineage. As a pope, Qianxunji is not young yet he has not married 😏😏

I hope the author can adopt 🥺🥺🥺 as the subsequent evaluation of Ye Xun

It's a bit watery and the plot is a bit weird. It's said at the beginning that your parents died trying to assassinate geniuses. Then you, a person with no background, can still rise to the third ring after a thousand years and still not die. Are you sure?

Change it! I don't like Qin Ming by nature

In recent chapters, too many protagonists have been surrounding Yu Xiaogang. It feels completely unnecessary. He is just a life-long level 29 FW. If you don't want to kill him, you can just drive him away. Is it necessary for the protagonist + Bibi Dong, the two beets of the Spirit Hall, to surround him and design a trap? Everyone is saying that Qian Renxue stealing the country is completely redundant. What is the difference between the protagonist and Qian Renxue? Practice hard, go out to practice if you have nothing to do, and become a god as soon as possible. How can Yu Xiaogang achieve anything no matter how awesome he is? Are you afraid that he will train Tang San? Is the protagonist Tang San still unable to get rid of him at such an age?

Bibi Dong

I feel that he is also a "pure and pure" person like Tang Buddha, who treats others with double standards. There are different opinions on the reason why Tang Buddha traveled to Douluo in the original work. Among them, the one recognized by the majority of netizens is: It is not mentioned in the original work, but there are some conspiracy theories that Tang San's soul was extradited by God Shura himself, and the ten thousand years of luck from Wuhun Palace was forced into Tang Buddha's body, artificially creating a son of luck. Otherwise, it would be difficult to explain why in the original work, God Shura, an old yinbi, cared so much about Tang Buddha, killed him personally, and arranged for two second-level gods to pass down the resurrection skills to resurrect the dead Tang Buddha. Completely regard the rule that the gods cannot interfere with the lower realm as nonsense. The mechanical deity of Tang Buddha in the original work of Emotional Dou Er was inherited from you.

I don't care if the plot is long or not, but as long as there is no brain or logic, it's fine. Now I like to watch Douluo novels with an earlier timeline.

If you want to improve the textual expression of the novel and make the plot ups and downs and full of literature, you can start from multiple dimensions such as narrative rhythm, use of rhetorical techniques, and emotional penetration. The following are specific methods and techniques: - Break the straightforward narrative and create ups and downs of the plot ​ - Foreshadowing and reversal: Inadvertently bury details (such as an unusual look in the character's eyes, a mysterious object) in the early stage, and then suddenly reveal its importance in the later stage, subverting readers' expectations. For example, the shabby jade pendant picked up by the protagonist by chance reveals an ancient formation at a critical moment, reversing the battle of life and death. ​ - Set up multiple obstacles: The protagonist's goal cannot be easily achieved, and obstacles such as powerful enemies, betrayal of companions, sudden natural disasters, etc. Can be arranged. For example, when the protagonist is trying to reach the realm of Soul Saint, he not only has to fight against the masters of the Soul Palace who are chasing him, but also encounters a riot of soul beasts caused by the strange phenomena of heaven and earth. ​ - Control the rhythm of the narrative: combine fast and slow, use short sentences and fragmented descriptions for intense battle scenes to create a sense of urgency; use long sentences and slow writing of key emotions or scenes with delicate brushstrokes. For example, when describing an assassination, first cut quickly with "cold light suddenly appeared, the dagger scratched the earlobe", and then slow down the rhythm with "blood beads on the blade slowly dripped along the lines, blooming dark red flowers on the bluestone board". ​ - Specific techniques to enhance literariness ​ - Skillful use of rhetorical techniques: ​ - Metaphor and personification: avoid common metaphors and look for novel ontology and metaphorical associations. For example, "His eyes were like quenched poisoned ice picks, and every glance carved tiny wounds on my skin." Personification can give emotions to inanimate things, such as "the old wooden door whimpers, as if crying about the forgotten years." ​ - Synesthesia application: interweaving different sensory experiences, such as "her singing voice is as cool as mint, flowing along the eardrums into the heart, dispelling the heat." ​ - Exaggeration and symbolism: Exaggeration highlights the atmosphere, such as "His roar distorted the air, and leaves rustled down for ten miles around"; symbolism gives things a deeper meaning, such as using "an ever-extinguishing candle" to symbolize the protagonist's belief. ​ - Quotes and translations: Use poems, proverbs or myths and legends to add cultural heritage to the story. For example, when describing a war, it can be described as "white bones are exposed in the wild, and there are no roosters crowing for thousands of miles", or the character can compare himself to a fairy tale, "I am just a Jingwei reclamation, and I do it knowing that I can't do it." ​ - Techniques to strengthen emotional rendering ​ - Use scenery to set off emotion: Choose the description of the environment according to the emotional tone. When you are sad, use "withered vines wrapped around the ruins, and the crows of crows tear the silence."; When you are happy, use "the sun pours like honey, and even the wind carries the sweet fragrance of flowers." ​ - Inner monologue and detailed characterization: Show the deep emotions of the character through a large and delicate inner monologue, or focus on small actions to convey emotions. For example, when she said goodbye, "Her fingers clenched the corners of her clothes tightly, her knuckles turned white, and her nails almost dug into her flesh, but she never said a word to stay." ​ - Emotional resonance points: Explore common human emotions, such as sacrifice of family, betrayal of friendship, and regret of love, and amplify and integrate these emotions into the plot. For example, the protagonist is willing to destroy his martial soul to save his relatives, which arouses readers' resonance with family love.

In the original work, Bibi Dong was a white-eyed wolf who had no chance to run away. There were many secrets of the Spirit Hall such as the names of the enshrined elders, martial soul information, Poseidon Island information, angel soul bones, etc. Ning Fengzhi and other upper three sects did not know these things, but Yu Xiaogang was able to tell them. Who revealed it to Yu Xiaogang, of course it was Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong ignored the upbringing and training from Wuhun Palace and wanted to elope with Yu Xiaogang for a love, which is even more embarrassing. It can be said that Qian Xunji's starting point in punishing Bibi Dong was correct. Even execution for such a traitor would not be an exaggeration. Qianxun Secret Room Bibi Dong's behavior was not enough to cover up Bibi Dong's mistakes. Bibi Dong has a problem, Qianxunji also has a problem, and the biggest problem of Qianxunji is that he is blind. This kind of powerful force has strict and strict restrictions on who the descendants come in contact with and who they communicate with. Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang happened to have a process. Normal people know that Yu Xiaogang has ulterior motives in contacting his descendants, and they will interrupt them. If you have watched Dream of Red Mansions, you will find that when this kind of powerful force trains its descendants, it will ask its descendants to arrange teachers to come in contact and train emotional intelligence. For example, Jia Baoyu, Xi Ren, Lin Daiyu, these are the teachers used by Jia Baoyu to train Jia Baoyu's emotional intelligence. You won't be caught in a trap by a woman when your puberty hormones are taking effect. To sum it up in one sentence, people like Bibi Dong are great. For specific examples, you can refer to the heroine Xu Qin in the TV series "My World's Fireworks". Getting back to the subject, if you train Bibi Dong seriously, there is no way that if you show her the prosperity of the world, she will fall in love with you. The plot of the original work is ridiculous and abstract! (Do not refer to the abstract plot of the extra story) But it depends on the situation. This novel depends on how the author operates. The author should be able to write it very well! ! !

Everyone looks down on me, but I can't live up to my expectations 😭 No one helps me to reach the top, and I can't get up 😭 Everyone laughs at me, but I am the funniest 😭 Instead of forcing myself, it is better to let myself go 😭 Strong people don't complain about the environment, but I am A weak person😭 I not only complain about the environment, I also complain about the strong people😭 I won't fight anyone who can defeat me😭 No one can take advantage of me, and I am useless myself😭 I wanted to cry under the quilt, but I fell asleep under the quilt😭

Why doesn't the protagonist, with his talent, join the Spirit Hall and hang out with Shrek? If you look at the original work, you will know that with the protagonist's talent, joining the Spirit Hall will definitely lead to a titled Douluo recruiting disciples. Hu Liena has become a disciple of the Pope, and the golden trio were all born as orphans. For those with a bad background, joining the Wuhun Palace is basically the only way out. At this time, Wuhun Palace under the leadership of Qian Daoliu is still very good. Otherwise, who will provide you with resources to hunt for soul rings?

Qin Ming: In front of Brother Xun, I am Brother Ming, and in front of you, I am Emperor Ming! Ye Xun: Ignore him, the second disease has occurred again. Bibi Dong: Xiaoxun, why didn't you come to see [Sister Donger] today? A Yin: Xiao Xun said that I am a soul beast, and he doesn't want to be a [straw man], wu wu wu Liu Erlong: He is my cousin? So what! [Distant house]! Bo Saixi: Tang Chen lied to me. Only Xiaoxun has the talent [to become a god] and treats me sincerely~ ... Tang Hao: Son, don't go against your [Uncle Xun], he is your uncle! Tang San: I always feel that my fate shouldn't be like this.

The protagonist is the same age as Qin Ming Qin Ming was 34 years old when he appeared (Seven Monsters VS Huang Dou) At the same time, Tang San was 14 years old (joined Shrek at the age of 12 and stayed for 2 years) Qian Renxue, Tang San was 10 years old and 24 years old at this time Bibi Dong 20 Qian Renxue was born at the age of 44, now Go back to the age when the protagonist met Bibi Dong in the book The protagonist was 6 years old, the same age as Qin Ming, Bibi Dong should be 16 years old At this time, it was less than 2 years before Bibi Dong met Yu Xiaogang, and there were still 3 years before he was locked in the secret room

Okay, I like the author's writing very much, it's food.

What does Qin Ming have to lick? Can't read

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Li Yuan'er

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long

I recommend a novel, "The Peerless Tang Sect: Dai Luoli's Road to Godhood". It's super good. You can click on my profile picture to read it directly. If it doesn't look good, feel free to comment.