Don't Talk About Weirdness

There are too many inner dramas that come back again and again. This makes the plot drag. I'm not sure if this is deliberately delaying the plot line, or the chapter outline is too loosely arranged, turning it into a repetitive filling of inner dramas that drags out chapters. Some of the details of soul-eating are a bit disgusting. After all, people roared in the ears, and the taste was ice-cold and sweet. There is a ginseng with Lingzhi who loves to drink soup. This is an interesting point. But this involves how the author wants to set up the weirdness. Is this intelligence biased towards people, like a border collie? Those who are not of my race must have different minds. People will die in water, but fish live in water. Different categories have different emphasis. Join the tradable ginseng to defeat the murderous village god. This is my impression after listening to the book today. It is recommended that the author adjust the inner drama in the outline so that it is not so much like "the outside world is not moving, just waiting for the magical girl's transformation time".

It's good to watch, I hope it won't turn into a fantasy novel disguised as horror in the future.

Looking at it so far, although the scary atmosphere is still slightly inferior to Twilight Partition, the other storylines, suspense, and small details are no worse than the first part of Twilight Partition. The author keeps it up, keep it up

After reading Chapter 85, I was poisoned and had to leave.

This is the number of deaths from the Black Death that I found. It was 75 million. That's why I chose a value of 40 million. I actually don't think it's an exaggeration. Because this is a virus that a whole country is trying to spread. I even think this value is a bit low. But recently many people have complained about this point, which makes me a little confused. Is this value really wrong?

I haven't read it yet, but it seems that the atmosphere in the comment area is pretty good so far. I looked for the new book rankings and found it, and it was pretty low in the rankings. However, since the comment area doesn't require people to pay to speak, it's rare to see good reviews in the comment area. I'll give it a try and come back to comment.

When writing about animals, write about animals. When writing about people, write about people. When writing about animals, write about people and people like animals. As a result, humans are not like humans and animals are not like animals. The same is true for the main text. If you want to write about food, then write about food. Inexplicably, there is a paragraph missing. There is no cause or effect and there is still more than half a paragraph.

The unit of items is often referred to as the economic system. In the first few chapters, the protagonist went to the mountain to collect medicine, and it was mentioned that red hair grass costs 25 copper coins per pound. The author obviously has never bought Chinese medicine. Because there are not many herbs that can be used, even in the mountains. Moreover, a grass is very light. If you want to pick one kilogram, you may need to pick it all from a large area, which consumes a lot of energy and time. It is difficult to measure. My suggestion is that when it comes to medicines in the future, count them in one or two dollars.

It looks good, it doesn't feel like a newbie, but you can change the area. There is not much traffic in this area, and it will be better if you go to fantasy.

It's a very good novel, but the writing pace was too slow, which dragged down my grades. I wrote more than 300,000 words to resist the village god of a novice village. I was given everything from golden finger opportunities to elixirs and money. The result was not that satisfying. The protagonist was tortured. If I continue writing like this, it will only become useless.

It's pretty good-looking, and the ginseng is cute. I hope the ginseng won't turn against the protagonist. The only small drawback is that the prescriptions in it should use more medicinal materials that are not available in reality. Even common medicinal materials such as red grass should be more fictitious. Otherwise, the effect of the medicine made from ordinary medicinal materials in the book will be too bizarre. Watching the ordinary names exert outrageous effects will be a bit confusing.

Do you have any tendency to turn to martial arts?

In the first few chapters, the pig's foot is portrayed as a waste + a broom star + an oil bottle. Is it the same later?

The author should change the zoning, suspense has no future, all the honest people next door have changed to the city

Lao Deng is reincarnated. Come and dig it up.

You won't be refining your book to death. . . .

Currently, there are 53 new books on the list. Every time it reaches 10 places, an additional chapter will be added. No duplication. This interaction will last until the new book list is released.

Which old man is reincarnated? This power, this plot promotion, the writing is really good

It's very well written, and it's the only one of the recent new books that I can read. The horror atmosphere is very well written, 9 out of 10. The writing is average, a six out of ten. The character logic aspect is a 10/7. I won't talk about the story aspect since it hasn't been fully reflected yet. Anyway, it's not a loss to watch.

In this terrifying and weird world view, if there is such a weird plot of gratitude, it will undoubtedly dilute the weird and desperate atmosphere. It conflicts with the "weird and unbelievable" information received by readers in the previous article. Let's see how the author handles it later. It may be that the protagonist joins forces with the human-eyed fox to solve the village god through Ergouzi, and then relies on ginseng to solve the human-eyed fox. It is also possible that the fox was deliberately caused by the village god to let Er Gouzi encounter him, and then attracted the human-eyed fox and the protagonist to catch them all. Finally, the official came forward to solve the problem once and for all. Or maybe the government is coveting the ginseng cloth. . . .

Two chapters are updated in one day. How do you sleep at your age?

It's not toxic so far, and it's a great read.

There is too little written, not enough to read! The plot is very good, come on👏make more

As I write, I drag my family with me.

Write faster, less b b

It's so well written and eloquently told, I hope you can stick with it!

Update quickly, where are you fishing?

It's a good subject matter and well written. Why did you commit suicide? I'll give you some dirt and help you grow your penis quickly.

What's your name, Chu Yun? You might as well just call Chu Yun,

. . . . It grew a little longer and then broke. . . Originally I wanted to raise 300 chapters before eating. . . . .