Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Awakening Daily Information

First of all, the author is a newcomer. Being able to write like this is considered a great effort! Secondly, I suggest the author read more other more successful novels to absorb his experience. There are many reasons for poor performance. The rhythm is wrong. You are not farming or doing daily writing. Why are you doing daily work with these NPCs all day long? There is nothing ordinary or simple about it. The fighting is also like a game, and the storyline is omitted. Just write whatever comes to mind. You don't have an outline. If you show your cheating behavior, I will know that this book has serious problems. The wealthy couple is in a legal place. First of all, if you have money, then what you need are the other three things. Write around other things and use money as support. But you have no solution for a period of Qi training. Now you are refining elixirs, now you are looking at weapon refining, now you are drawing talismans, and now you are looking at formations. You are so idle. This is just writing without an outline. Now that you have money, these are not things you should write about to pave the way for your character's character and growth trajectory during your Qi training period. To put it bluntly, follow the example of ordinary people in the first fifteen chapters, and most people will leave after reading two or three chapters. Your writing skills are poor and your thinking is narrow. What you write is to persuade me to quit! There is a foundation for the success of great things. What you need to learn is how he arranges plots and tells stories, not something you want to write even if you can't crawl. It's great for a newcomer to write this. I hope you can do better in the next book.

What kind of intelligence system do you have here? It's clearly a wet market briefing.

Rubbish novel, kids playing house

Isn't this just a mere imitation of a mortal? I can make one with an AI.

This is too slow to build up. It's almost 500 chapters and you haven't built a foundation yet. The only thing you need to do during the Qi refining period is to improve your cultivation. Pills, talismans, weapons, arrays, puppets, insects, beasts and other methods can wait until you have built a foundation and formed a pill. Or you can choose one to specialize in the others first and understand them first before practicing. Also, why would you, a casual cultivator who doesn't have a 10th level weapon refining, venture into a secret realm? Is your space-time tower a decoration? All of the above can be done after foundation building and elixir formation.

More than 500 chapters have passed, and we haven't even reached the foundation building yet😅😅

It's okay. Although it partially borrows from mortals, it also has a lot of new ideas and nothing bad. It's a pretty good writing for newcomers.

There are shadows of mortals. Too many hangups.

Chinese translation of "The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"

I am writing a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality, but it is not interesting 😊

This hero! Just because of cultivating immortality! So it's at your doorstep! You don't even go in to see your parents! Eat, eat!

The foreshadowing is actually very good, but the protagonist, you have a compulsive delusion. Everyone looks like there is always a treacherous minister who wants to kill me.

The Time and Space Tower and an unlimited intelligence system... As long as the protagonist doesn't wander around, he can easily become an immortal and an ancestor, right? Is this setting of such a heaven-defying bug really reasonable?

If you haven't read "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", I suggest you watch it and feel more comfortable. There is a treasure next to you every day, and an old man started to do it from the beginning. The result is that your skills are wasted, you are drunk, and you give up. In addition, the golden finger of intelligence is not enough, but also the Tower of Time. . . .

It feels like an AI article, with several repeated words and logical problems. An alchemist who is not short of spiritual grass (time and space tower ripening + reproduction) is actually short of money? I have seen more than 130 chapters. The protagonist encounters a descendant of the family whose equipment is lagging behind. It is so fucking retarded. He has never thought about making more furnaces of pills and selling them for money. It is so stupid.