
Swallowed Star: The Azure Lotus Saint
吞噬星空之青莲圣主
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
297Chapters
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There are no other poisonous points, except that you, the protagonist, keep talking to yourself, what do you dare to say about your past and present life in the fantasy sea of the virtual universe? Do you know where the virtual universe is? In the Blood Luo Continent, you dare to say anything about the Luo Feng era. You are really criticized. Not to mention that the author himself wrote the protagonist and is monitored in real time and can be checked at any time. Any master of the universe can turn the underwear worn by the protagonist's ancestors hundreds of millions of generations ago to the bottom. You are always talking to yourself. It is really a fool to persuade you to quit.
The author is very particular about the setting of the original work, but he talks to himself too much. This habit is not good in the world of Devouring the Starry Sky.
After reading the first chapter, the protagonist starts as a slave. Although he is free immediately, if he does not take revenge later, it will be really unbearable.
It's really not a good look for two people to wander around together.
It doesn't matter if there's a female protagonist, it's really not okay for two people to do everything together. There's a reason why most of the fantasy world is done by one person.
I muttered to myself why I kept mumbling to myself, and then I muttered to myself why there were so many reasons. I muttered to myself, of course it was because I liked mumbling to myself.
You dare to refuse Emperor Yan's offer to be a disciple, you are really looking for death...
"Mumbling to myself" should be changed to: "Thinking" is better
I've only seen one in the past two days. I can't say it's similar, I can only say it's exactly the same. It seems to be called "The Battle of Life and Death with the Giant Ax"
Two poison spots
One is always talking to himself, muttering to himself The second is refusing to accept Emperor Yan as a disciple. Later, Giant Ax accepts the protagonist's teacher as his apprentice. The handling here is very poor. Can the relationship between disciples and masters be compared? And he directly said that the teacher's talent is not up to the standard for Juaxe to accept disciples, and Juaxe cannot accept disciples because Emperor Yan does not accept disciples. It is all for dumplings made with vinegar. The senses are very poor, and it makes him inferior to others for no reason, not to mention that he will have to borrow money from the teacher later. The more I think about it, the more disgusting I feel🤢
The plot just happened to be too much, and the villain forced his wits down 😥