The Holy Lord Qinglian Who Devours the Starry Sky

There are no other poisonous points, except that you, the protagonist, keep talking to yourself, what do you dare to say about your past and present life in the fantasy sea of ​​the virtual universe? Do you know where the virtual universe is? In the Blood Luo Continent, you dare to say anything about the Luo Feng era. You are really criticized. Not to mention that the author himself wrote the protagonist and is monitored in real time and can be checked at any time. Any master of the universe can turn the underwear worn by the protagonist's ancestors hundreds of millions of generations ago to the bottom. You are always talking to yourself. It is really a fool to persuade you to quit.

The author is very particular about the setting of the original work, but he talks to himself too much. This habit is not good in the world of Devouring the Starry Sky.

After reading the first chapter, the protagonist starts as a slave. Although he is free immediately, if he does not take revenge later, it will be really unbearable.

It doesn't matter if there's a female protagonist, it's really not okay for two people to do everything together. There's a reason why most of the fantasy world is done by one person.

I muttered to myself why I kept mumbling to myself, and then I muttered to myself why there were so many reasons. I muttered to myself, of course it was because I liked mumbling to myself.

"Mumbling to myself" should be changed to: "Thinking" is better

You dare to refuse Emperor Yan's offer to be a disciple, you are really looking for death...

I've only seen one in the past two days. I can't say it's similar, I can only say it's exactly the same. It seems to be called "The Battle of Life and Death with the Giant Ax"

I said to myself, whether it is in the real universe or the virtual universe, there are ways to check. The real universe is the master of the universe. If you go back in time and space to see you from birth to now, it can dig out your panties. Although this thing is mainly used for resurrection in the original work, it is excellent at checking people, checking conspiracy, and checking the culprits. For example, the giant ax can check the origin of the earth, let alone the virtual universe.

The plot just happened to be too much, and the villain forced his wits down 😥

One is always talking to himself, muttering to himself The second is refusing to accept Emperor Yan as a disciple. Later, Giant Ax accepts the protagonist's teacher as his apprentice. The handling here is very poor. Can the relationship between disciples and masters be compared? And he directly said that the teacher's talent is not up to the standard for Juaxe to accept disciples, and Juaxe cannot accept disciples because Emperor Yan does not accept disciples. It is all for dumplings made with vinegar. The senses are very poor, and it makes him inferior to others for no reason, not to mention that he will have to borrow money from the teacher later. The more I think about it, the more disgusting I feel🤢

I don't know why, but I really like devouring fans, but I can't stand this one.

The beginning of the story was pretty good, but there was a female protagonist, so I didn't want to continue reading, ugh

As soon as the protagonist comes out, everyone else becomes a wooden person? Directly evaporated.

If you don't write about the original inhabitants, then you write about a hammer swallowing the starry sky. It feels very fragmented and doesn't look good.

Why do you keep writing about female protagonists? Devouring the heroine is like a vase, can't you write the protagonist well?

Can it be changed? I thought to myself

The protagonist doesn't look like someone who has been practicing for hundreds of years and has fished for people hundreds of times in life and death!

The author didn't even understand the setting of the original work before he started writing it. Devouring the Starry Sky is different from other fantasy novels. There is no small realm breakthrough that doubles the strength on the battlefield. The small realm breakthrough can only continue to accumulate energy, and the strength is almost unchanged from before the breakthrough. The sudden change in strength is a big realm breakthrough, which is a breakthrough in the laws of the secret field.

I had given up on it for many days, but after reading the book "The Strongest Man", I immediately felt that this book was okay, so I came back again.

How do you do it if you can't listen to 1.0 And 5 names on a page?

The author who just wrote this book has a long time span. If you like it, you can check it out!

The writing in the front is a bit rough, but the writing in the back is pretty good. I have my own stuff, but the updates are too slow.

Has the author also watched Star Hunters🤭

If you don't change it, I will become a eunuch. I really like it.

I couldn't stand it any longer, so I clicked on the table of contents and the author yelled and hung up in the tenth chapter. Even in the golden chapters, I didn't know how desperate the author was.

The author writes very well! Welcome everyone to click on the homepage to view my new works~

Borrow the treasure and promote his second book "Ten Thousand Times Feedback from the Villain Reborn in the Star-Swallowing Sky" Li Zhou can get multiple feedback from the efforts of the villain reborn. Emperor Yan, Queen of the Zerg, World Beast Bedi... The timeline is before the original ancestor was suppressed.

"Pluto Devouring the Starry Sky" I would like to recommend my new book. I welcome your comments. I will work hard to write every chapter. Thank you.

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