Simultaneous Transmigration: I Become a God Among the Heavens

Basically, more than 90% of them are Naruto Pirates .

When you write about the flow of people from all over the world, you added a Western fantasy. Do you think the flow is too big and there are too many people?

The strength increases too quickly and the plot is too dry. Food and grass cannot be counted. At most, it can only be counted as sugar cane. You can take it out and chew it when you have nothing to do. The protagonist's combat power begins to collapse in Chapter 11 or 2. The people who come to the Land of Fire to attack food transportation are at least Chuunin, right? There are quite a few Jonin, right? When Kakashi jounin rescued Lin, he was chased by Kirikage's pursuit team. As a result, the protagonist had not learned a few ninjutsu and had no experience in life-and-death combat. He had only competed with his classmates once or twice. He cut melons and vegetables and beat back the middle jounin team. The description of the battle was also dry and dry, with only a few sentences...

I have watched a lot of cross-flow, but what about those same-flow cheats? Opening a cheat requires restrictions and suppresses combat power, and some even cannot share power, so why open a cross-flow cheat? Looking at the superimposition of time-traveling, don't you just want to see the plot changed by the invincible protagonist? Even if the current world power system cannot do something, then use the power of other worlds to do it. Isn't this why we look at co-currents? So this book is good, it does not limit combat power, is invincible quickly, and is invincible in one world. There is no plot reference to write, and it can also be written about other worlds. After all, this is the same world, so there is no need to limit combat power and limit plug-ins for the sake of plot. This is good.

"Stealing Stars in September" is a comic and a very popular work of "ZhiYinManKe". It was the most popular during its serialization period. At its peak, it surpassed popular works such as "Fights Break the Sphere" and "Douluo Dalu", and the discussion remained high all year round. Can you write about Stealing Stars in September?

Naruto is too fake, revolution will kill people

Isn't it a bad theme to wear the same clothes? Why are there so many people writing recently? Every one of them is overwhelmed!

Can we make the same mistakes as the sun and the moon, a current Chinese comic?

The writing is average, and the plot is nothing fancy but too simple. Like a chronicle, it is reasonably developed but has too little description. I wish it could be described in more detail. Although I heard that the author does not listen to opinions.

In the sea of ​​​​dead fire, the pace can be faster, just take the main abilities, briefly talk about the plot, write it as a cool article, and just catch the traffic. Focus on the world behind. If you really write in a long way, you are either writing the plot for the sake of writing the plot, or to suppress the combat power. Write more to open up the ability, and the worlds are different and complementary. The latter can be written to be more relaxed, invincible, or have high growth potential, and then just have fun.