Fairy Silkworm

Then the eunuch posted on Zhihu "The Internet literary circle collectively broke the defense!" Why was Lan Li Lao Mo banned from the "ceiling of contemporary online writers"? 🙂

Start with past life inheritance. How many chapters are there now? At most, the protagonist has acquired a magic door, and he doesn't even know where it is.

Abusing the mainstream classical cultivation of immortality, it takes the setting of Shushan and some early immortal cultivation novels. It is indeed rare, but the rarity also means that the results are generally not very good, and it requires the control of the writing. It is still difficult to keep the readers reading. The description of the character is also difficult, and the author must be aware of his own strengths and weaknesses.

Asking about Emei Xian Chan First-grade Taoist species Taojun, starting from the clerk of Xianting Xianpao Xiancan

The readers in the book review section are also much smarter. This author may be trying to write about the difficulty of entering the immortal world. The idea is indeed good, but unfortunately he does not know whether his writing skills are insufficient or his experience is too shallow. The protagonist is like a fool, not even as good as an ordinary person.

It's just a complaint. I'm 13 or 14 years old. I'm pretty and beautiful. I really feel that the author has never been exposed to any handsome guys and beauties. Those celebrities are ugly when they are fat. And when they are 13 or 14 years old, they still have no growth. It's not too much to say that their life span will be shortened by three years at a glance. . There are no fat beauties. They are so exquisite. You can't imagine that you haven't come into contact with them. To put it bluntly, if you were liked by such a girl when you were in school, you would want to jump off the building and you would secretly have feelings for her. .

I knew you would be a eunuch, repeating the same old path from book to book, being stubborn and not learning lessons and experiences. Fortunately, I didn't subscribe this time😌😌😌

This opening is very fairy-like. The protagonist walks in the path of immortality and demon, and by chance, he gets the top inheritance and magic weapon. This writing style can probably be traced back to the martial arts novels of the last century, but it is really a bit old now. At the same time, every time the protagonist runs around and mediates between immortals and demons, the timing is too coincidental: it happens that the old snake is surrendered by the enemy, it happens that the master's daughter gets the fate of immortality, but it happens that the snake's venom has no solution, and the reversals are too many and too fast, which makes people tired. When did the protagonist decide to practice Taoism? Or does the author plan to give him a red fruit, add a lot of skill to him, and then continue to stir up trouble in the world? I really don't like this kind of protagonist who has a lot to do.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has only started to practice in chapter 30, and he is still practicing heresy. It's hard to stand up.

I finally understand what inaction means. The protagonist is busy and busy, and has gone around in a big circle. After experiencing life and death, it is better to do nothing and work honestly, and Xianyuan comes to your door. Deliberately force it, but when I see Xianyuan, I can't care about anything, but I'm going around the bush.

A character like a pig's trotter is only worthy of repair. Congratulations to the author for successfully creating a protagonist who makes people feel particularly disgusting.

It looks like shit compared to your fairy toad

The protagonist is a good socialist young man with a kind heart and no bloodiness.

Nowadays, all the literature is systematic. It is rare to find serious classical fairy tales.

I won't read books that are destined to be eunuchs. As far as I know, this author has written about Xianpao, Eunuch, Wendao Emei, Eunuch, this title is also written before, Xianchan, Eunuch. In terms of his writing style and writing skills, as well as imagination, logic, etc., It is okay and yes A very good online writer, no worse than Chen Dong and other great writers. His eunuch novels, if he can finish them well, will definitely become popular, but he can't. What he pursues is to make money easily. The same routine can be changed and he will continue to make bad money.

No, buddy, it's the eunuch again.

Xian Chan is pretty good, so why don't I write about it. There are a lot of other things that I won't mention. It's such a pity that I won't write about Xian Chan.

Sure enough, he is a eunuch, let me tell you.

1. The title of the novel has nothing to do with the content of the novel, there is no such thing as silkworm. 2. Water, most of the content is character dialogue, and some things can be said over and over again. 3. The protagonist is not well portrayed. The protagonist has no brain, he doesn't feel his own thinking, and everything is pushing people around the whole time. In addition, he stabbed this person in the back and that person in the back, and later risked his life for the master whom he had met twice. (The master and adoptive father are well written, but the protagonist is poorly written) 4. The plot is very frustrating. The protagonist is either caught or on the way to being caught. The author wants to reflect the interdependence of misfortune and good fortune in the world view, and the benefits after disaster, but it is particularly frustrating for people to take it into account. (In order to detoxify, I revealed the whereabouts of the cave boss to the old monster who can detoxify, resulting in the boss's magic weapon being stolen. This is completely a cause and effect. The author wrote about the cause and effect disaster throughout, but in the end, there was no cause and effect in this matter?)

Support new authors, come on!

Published by the studio, there are always a bunch of books with similar themes and outlines popping up for a period of time. The one with good results is recommended to be continued, and other writers are just supporting it. During the same period of this book, there were many similar books, all of which were eunuchs, and some were reincarnated. A wet fetus became popular, and at the same time, a lot of reincarnated books were also eunuchs. This author is the kind of person who can't make it out of water. If he can't make it, he'll be a waste whatever he writes.

Just for perfect attendance, no morals at all

At least send out the archived manuscript.

Let me just say, he must be a eunuch. . . The most well-written fairy tale is the eunuch. . After a little training, the eunuch will be okay, but I haven't watched it yet.