Myriad Worlds: The Chronicles of Zhenwu’s Demon-Slaying

Why bother with all that ridiculous secondary plot points instead of focusing on developing the story properly? I'm speechless.

What kind of nonsense is this Phagpa you wrote about? If he's so powerful, why doesn't he just fly to the heavens? Your Golden Wheel Monk reached the tenth level in the blink of an eye! Even if you did, you beat Hong Qi like a dog. After just one small battle, Hong Qi was already defeated? What does this say about the Five Greats?

Truly invincible: sweeps away everything, one against many, a sure win. Unbeatable among its peers: A guaranteed win against multiple opponents of the same level. The author's view of invincibility: In a one-on-one fight, I have a high win rate. Don't treat your readers like Japanese people; don't lure them in to kill them.

Li Mochou deserved to die for what she did; keeping her imprisoned for Xiaolongnu's sake was enough. Why make it so complicated? 🙂

The power dynamics are completely distorted, it's disgusting to watch. They portray the Tibetan barbarians as gods and the Five Great Masters of the Central Plains as dogs. What is the author trying to convey with this? They're just like those self-proclaimed public intellectuals today, blatantly lying and hypocritical.

1. Artistic Youth Syndrome 2. The main character lacks relatability, and his behavior appears hypocritical. 3. The premise is too novel. Dugu Qiubai is a woman, and Xiaolongnu is a descendant of Murong Fu and Wang Yuyan. Dugu Qiubai is also a woman. If you can accept all of the above, this book is still worth reading. I only read up to the backgrounds of Dugu Qiubai and Xiaolongnu, and didn't read the rest.

The Golden Wheel Monk is portrayed as far too powerful! The Dragon Elephant Prajna Skill is exaggerated beyond belief? He's described as possessing immense strength, but even with the Golden Wheel Monk's ten levels of strength sixteen years later, he's not that much stronger than the Five Greats.

This is too cruel. The author used Hong Qigong as a stepping stone to highlight the protagonist. I would accept it if the protagonist had defeated Hong Qigong, since it's normal for someone with the Nine Yin and Nine Yang skills and a cheat code to win. But writing that Jinlun Fawang mastered the tenth level of the Dragon Elephant Prajna Skill sixteen years ahead of time is already cruel.

Is he really taking his whole family on a time-travel journey? How boring.

This is writing martial arts as if it were fantasy. The battle scenes lack any detail, and the author is unwilling to expand the plot, reducing the novel to nothing more than a monotonous chronicle. The plot and characters are all driven by the villains insulting Xiaolongnu, which is ridiculous.