Young Ma Kongqun from the Start

It seems many readers don't know who Ma Kongqun is. Ma Kongqun is a villain in Gu Long's novel (Border Town Prodigal). He established the Guandong Wanmatang because he was jealous of Bai Tianyu and coveted the property of the Shendaotang. Together with Fairy Baiyun Ding Baiyun, they plotted to ambush and kill their sworn brother, Invincible Divine Blade Bai Tianyu (Ye Kai's father), and Bai…

Bai Tianyu, as depicted by Gu Long, is a beast. Even if he is the best in the world, he is still a beast.

The biggest taboo in this type of fanfiction is having an original female protagonist. Fanfiction based on shared interests is simply about creating something deeply relatable and engaging. Besides, with your level 5 innate talent and comprehension, you're already a peerless genius! Why are you on par with an original female protagonist at level 8 in innate talent and comprehension?

General Outline: The Great Compassion Ode of the Interplay of Heaven and Earth, Yin and Yang Seven Unique Skills: Barehanded, powerful: Heaven-Shattering Earth-Splitting Great Mystic Weapon Hand Transfer and resolution: The power of heaven and earth to reverse the universe Lightness Skill: The Great Shift of Heaven and Earth Soft Power: Heavenly Strike and Earth-Destroying Great Yin Thunder Palm

The beginning was well-written, but the later parts lost my appeal. I'd rather just watch the drama unfold. In Gu Long's world, someone like you, constantly arguing with others, wouldn't last long. 🤫

It gets increasingly boring after Bai Tianyu is killed. The protagonist should have developed his own power base, strengthened Wanmatang, and then defeated Bai Tianyu – that would have been so much more interesting. Now, judging by this sequel, are you trying to turn it into a story like Detective Ma Kongqun, just trying to fit the original story for the sake of it?

The biggest characteristic of Gu Long fanfiction, in my opinion, is the martial arts world and beautiful women. Are you trying to conquer the world? And to add an original female lead? These are all flaws.

The writing was going well, but honestly, it started to feel off after Wang Qiong's appearance, and I didn't want to read any further.

Why do people like writing about war? If you want to express patriotism, you can write war novels. Writing about fighting Japanese pirates in martial arts novels is like making fried rice and then adding wasabi. I don't understand it.

It's well-written, but too short, and there are too few updates. There's a reason why so many people tried to kill Bai Tianyu. It's always said that it's a pity, as if he were a positive figure, but what he did back then was really despicable. I can't speak for the novel, but in Ti Lung's film, Ma Kongqun kills him. That makes perfect sense.