Please Ascend to Immortality

Looking at the introduction, you can tell that the Riddler is a bit of a literary youth.

Everyone pretends to be pretentious when talking, some are particularly pretentious, some are particularly pretentious, and some are particularly pretentious. Is this what literary youth are?

Have you ever practiced immortality? It's natural to write something randomly.

In fact, don't you feel strange when you see this? The protagonist is hated by everyone wherever he goes?

No one with a bit of depression would be able to write a story about such a neurotic person.

The author is a writer with youthful illness. The protagonist has been pushed away, offending people for no reason, and helping people for no reason. For example, the gang leader's wife, because the gang leader died because of the protagonist, so she went to help? Aren't you very familiar with each other? In the end, I have to make amends with a clear conscience.

Could this character's dialogue be more awkward? Pretending to be serious for the sake of pretending to be serious looks really awkward. Abandoned, take your time and take a look.

You can read it when you're bored. The characters are basically disgusting, including the protagonist, who doesn't speak like a human being. If you plan to write the next book, I don't recommend continuing this style.

Why did I change my name to a more junior high school name? But that's okay, I thought you were going to change it to become the Lord of All Laws from the moment you go down the mountain, hahahaha.

I feel like the writing is a bit bland. Also, who is the protagonist's master?