From True Disciple of an Immortal Sect to Supreme Dao Lord

Finally, it's not a "Foundation Establishment Grandmaster" novel anymore. Damn it, a Qi Refining or Foundation Establishment cultivator would write a hundred or two hundred chapters and then just stop. To put it bluntly, it's because they didn't have an outline, they weren't confident in their own books, and they didn't dare to write the feeling of a high-level cultivator, so they forced down the combat power.

As the title suggests, it's clear the author has drawn inspiration from the themes of immortality and the Great Dao, but the writing style is indeed a bit simplistic. My assessment is that it's readable, but requires more practice.

It's good; my buddy just loves the genius genre.

I feel that getting involved in the affairs of the Dao Lords too early is problematic. The protagonist is currently still a Dao Lord, and getting too involved in the Dao Lords' affairs would make the later developments difficult.

In short, it's mediocre at best. It would be better to write a story where the protagonist enters and immediately starts killing 😒 in CCC.

The "genius" genre is quite good, so why are there so few monthly votes? The novel "Qingwu Immortal Clan" next door, written with AI, gets hundreds.

There are only 12 Great Realms left. For millions of years, no one has been able to obtain these twelve Realm Seeds. So where did the Great Realm Seeds of the First and Third Generation Ancestors, the Dao Child, and the Sect Leader (only Great Realm Seeds can become Dao Venerables) come from? There are only so many Dao Venerables in this realm; twelve are simply not enough to go around.

Why not kill Zhao Quanming?

Isn't it almost over? Each realm is short, and judging from the title, the protagonist only has two more realms left before it ends.

It's somewhat like the style of Tomato's writing; keep that style, genius-themed, preferably with a single female lead. If romance is difficult to write, then don't include a female lead.