From True Disciple of an Immortal Sect to Supreme Dao Lord

Finally, it is no longer a "Foundation Building Powerful" novel. MD wrote one hundred and two hundred chapters about practicing Qi and building a foundation. To put it bluntly, there is no outline. I am not confident in my own book, and I dare not write about the feeling of a high-level immortal cultivator.

Like the title, it can be seen that the author has borrowed from Immortal Industry and Dao, but the writing style is indeed a bit dull. My evaluation is that it can be read, but it still needs practice.

It's beautiful, I see you as a genius.

I feel like I got involved too early in some affairs of the Taoist masters. The protagonist is still the Taoist master. It would be difficult to write a plot involving too many Taoist masters.

In a word, it's ordinary, it's better to write about the devil's way and kill him when he comes in 😒 in CCC

Genius Liu's writing is very good, why are the monthly tickets so low? The Qingwu Immortal clan next door uses AI to write articles with hundreds of dollars.

There are only 12 great realms left. No one has been able to obtain these twelve realm seeds for millions of years. So where did the great realm seeds of the first and third generations of ancestors, a certain Taoist master and the leader (only the great realm realm seeds became Taoist masters) and others come from. There are only so many Taoist masters in this realm. Twelve are not enough. Even if the destroyed great realm realm seeds are preserved and can be used, they are not enough.

Why not kill Zhao Quanming?

Isn't it almost the end of the book? Each realm is short. Judging from the title, the protagonist still has two realms before the end.

It's a bit like what Tomato wrote. Keep this style and flow of genius. It's best to have a single female protagonist. If the emotional drama is not easy to write, don't use a female protagonist.