
How Did I Become Their Divine Personality? !
我怎么成了她们的神性人格?!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 176k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It looks okay, but I don't know why all the characters are so stiffly drawn, and it looks a bit awkward.
Have you ever been a divine personality? Take it for granted and write randomly 😅
I just finished reading the third chapter. The protagonist did not say the word "symbiosis" to Lin Ya, but only said "cooperation". Why did Lin Ya directly say "Cooperation? Symbiosis? What are these things?" I hope it can be changed 🙂
It looks okay, but the pace is a bit rushed
Speaking of which, the protagonist setting of this book always looked familiar. I thought I had read it somewhere. Then I looked through my book collection and found that I had indeed read something similar, but it was much earlier than this one. 🙂 Why do you now like to start a wall-hanging soul walking and possessing game?
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I read the introduction and guessed the plot, which is a common nurturing theme. But what I want to say is that from the introduction, the name of the heroine set by the author is not distinctive. Readers have no expectations for this heroine from the name, and the feeling and appeal are inferior. In this kind of novel, where the heroine is raised to be a strong person, it is best not to give the heroine a weak and ordinary name. A good heroine name can highlight the heroine's character and image, and add to the plot and writing style. For characters who have been tempered and perseverant since the beginning, they should be chosen as those who sound like heroes among women and talented women of all time, corresponding to the kind of waste material picked up by the old man from Xiaoyan, such as Lin Aiqiu, Chen Qinglong, Zhang Dai, Feng Xianyue, and Zhu Chan; Later, they acted decisively and talked and laughed, creating a contrasting and distinct impression on the readers, such as Luo Shuixuan, Li Ying, Fei Leimeng, Zhao Nanxun, and Meng Xin; for those who were born in poverty and had a fragile and low self-esteem at the beginning, the first names should be nicknamed to highlight the image of the heroine, such as Ya'er, Ruo'er, Xiaohe, Nannan, and Su Su. My level of naming is just like this. The examples may not be good, but look at those well-written romance, harem, and ancient novels. If the heroine's name is well chosen, it can really make the reading more interesting. Of course, these are just icing on the cake. No matter how good the name is, it is only an auxiliary. What is good will not last forever. A good plot is the real king.
I thought that the spirit can be changed, and the protagonist can also become a beautiful girl like the host to increase feelings.
My feeling is that time has not caught up. When you are around 16 or 18 years old, I feel that you can still make this meal.
Have you ever been a Piao? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.
I thought he was a divine person, the hero of destiny, but he turns out to be a divine personality.
They? When will there be a second one, and what will the heroine do if the main character is gone?
How many people does the male protagonist possess? Now it looks like she has been tied to death with the current heroine
Writing is okay
The early writing is very good, but in my impression, the story behind it is a routine for the boss protagonist to bring up the cute new heroine. The current heroine relies too much on the protagonist to fight for her. Basically, she only fights with the protagonist. The help provided by the protagonist is too great, and the growth and change of the heroine cannot be seen at all. Without the protagonist, the heroine is still an ordinary person except that her level has become higher.
When are you going to pave the way for the next heroine?
The pace so far is quite fast, but there is no foreshadowing of the next heroine at all. I almost forgot that they were in the title of the book if I didn't read it.
At that time, I said that the popularity was not very good, and I was adamant at that time, but now I have actually cut it off.